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	Comments on: Warrior Writer: Blood Lesson Number One—Kill the Little Darlings, They’re Rigged!	</title>
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		By: submeg		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[Just grabbed the Hooked ebook, will get Bob&#039;s book next!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just grabbed the Hooked ebook, will get Bob&#8217;s book next!</p>
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		By: The Hook		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[The Hook]]></dc:creator>
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					<description><![CDATA[This one hooked me  (Yeah, I know!) right from the title... Great work!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This one hooked me  (Yeah, I know!) right from the title&#8230; Great work!</p>
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		By: kristenh09		</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 28 Sep 2009 16:51:49 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I haven&#039;t read Bob&#039;s second book yet. I&#039;m behind. But I&#039;ve been told, that if it doesn&#039;t advance the plot, cut it out for my feedback in Venom. Is that right? Anything to help me reach my word count goal of 90 K thereabouts. This does help me out lots. :-)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I haven&#8217;t read Bob&#8217;s second book yet. I&#8217;m behind. But I&#8217;ve been told, that if it doesn&#8217;t advance the plot, cut it out for my feedback in Venom. Is that right? Anything to help me reach my word count goal of 90 K thereabouts. This does help me out lots. 🙂</p>
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		By: warriorwriters		</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 19 Aug 2009 12:55:44 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2009/06/warrior-writer-blood-lesson-number-one-kill-the-little-darlings-theyre-rigged/#comment-388&quot;&gt;Jamie&lt;/a&gt;.

Actually Bob has an excellent template for creating great characters in The Toolkit. I have a blog I will be posting this month on characterization based off a lot of his teachings. And thanks for taking the time to comment. That really helps me hone in on subjects you guys want to hear more about...that and the compliments are always a bright spot in my day. :D]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2009/06/warrior-writer-blood-lesson-number-one-kill-the-little-darlings-theyre-rigged/#comment-388">Jamie</a>.</p>
<p>Actually Bob has an excellent template for creating great characters in The Toolkit. I have a blog I will be posting this month on characterization based off a lot of his teachings. And thanks for taking the time to comment. That really helps me hone in on subjects you guys want to hear more about&#8230;that and the compliments are always a bright spot in my day. 😀</p>
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		By: Jamie		</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 18 Aug 2009 20:13:08 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Excellent post. I know I have trouble with characterization, and I&#039;m working through a course to learn how to create better characters that readers can relate to. Do you have any suggestions for learning characterization once you&#039;re able to spot the problem? I&#039;m planning to order &quot;The Novel Writer&#039;s Toolkit&quot; - does that book address the issue of characterization at all?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent post. I know I have trouble with characterization, and I&#8217;m working through a course to learn how to create better characters that readers can relate to. Do you have any suggestions for learning characterization once you&#8217;re able to spot the problem? I&#8217;m planning to order &#8220;The Novel Writer&#8217;s Toolkit&#8221; &#8211; does that book address the issue of characterization at all?</p>
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		By: Handy Dandy Series &#171; Shadow and Fang		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Handy Dandy Series &#171; Shadow and Fang]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 04 Aug 2009 15:11:33 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[...] Blood Lesson Number One&#8211;Kill the Little Darlings, They&#8217;re Rigged [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] Blood Lesson Number One&#8211;Kill the Little Darlings, They&#8217;re Rigged [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: Bob Mayer		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Bob Mayer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 04 Aug 2009 14:59:26 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[The only advice my first agent gave me on the first book we were going to market, was to simplify the plot.  It was very complex and he used the example of The Hunt For Red October, at it&#039;s core, being a very simple story.  A simple story told well is much better than a complex story.

The emotional link to the characters is what makes suspense.  We have to care about the fates of the characters or we won&#039;t care about the story.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The only advice my first agent gave me on the first book we were going to market, was to simplify the plot.  It was very complex and he used the example of The Hunt For Red October, at it&#8217;s core, being a very simple story.  A simple story told well is much better than a complex story.</p>
<p>The emotional link to the characters is what makes suspense.  We have to care about the fates of the characters or we won&#8217;t care about the story.</p>
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