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		By: R. A. Meenan		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[Well darn it... Now I&#039;m questioning my opening. XP Again.]]></description>
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		By: The Doctor is in the House–Novel Diagnostics &#171; Kristen Lamb&#039;s Blog		</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 26 Sep 2011 13:15:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		By: The Doctor is in the House&#8211;Novel Diagnostics &#171; Kristen Lamb&#039;s Blog		</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 31 Jan 2011 22:22:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		By: Author Kristen Lamb		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Author Kristen Lamb]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 31 Jan 2011 14:55:49 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2010/09/how-do-you-hook-a-reader-understand-great-beginnings-part-i/#comment-1365&quot;&gt;*S&lt;/a&gt;.

&lt;a href=&quot;http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/2010/09/27/7-deadly-sins-of-prologues-great-novel-beginnings-part-2/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;The 7 Deadly Sins of Prologues&lt;/a&gt; is the only other lesson. I started a long series on structure after that. Hope this helps! :D]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2010/09/how-do-you-hook-a-reader-understand-great-beginnings-part-i/#comment-1365">*S</a>.</p>
<p><a href="http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/2010/09/27/7-deadly-sins-of-prologues-great-novel-beginnings-part-2/" rel="nofollow">The 7 Deadly Sins of Prologues</a> is the only other lesson. I started a long series on structure after that. Hope this helps! 😀</p>
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		By: *S		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[Can you give links to the rest of the series &quot;great beginnings&quot;? I see the title of this post includes Part 1 and I&#039;d love to read your follow up blogs on how to begin a novel, but I can&#039;t find them in your archives.
 I am currently struggling with the first ten pages of my book...when in time do I begin, how to hook the reader but also give enough backstory, exc. Your blog is SO helpful and have made a great impact on my writing and progress of my memoir (which I&#039;d like to read more like a novel than a typical memoir). Thank you!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Can you give links to the rest of the series &#8220;great beginnings&#8221;? I see the title of this post includes Part 1 and I&#8217;d love to read your follow up blogs on how to begin a novel, but I can&#8217;t find them in your archives.<br />
 I am currently struggling with the first ten pages of my book&#8230;when in time do I begin, how to hook the reader but also give enough backstory, exc. Your blog is SO helpful and have made a great impact on my writing and progress of my memoir (which I&#8217;d like to read more like a novel than a typical memoir). Thank you!</p>
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		By: The Doctor is in the House&#8211;Novel Diagnostics &#171; Kristen Lamb&#039;s Blog		</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 04 Oct 2010 17:27:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		By: Kristen Lamb		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2010/09/how-do-you-hook-a-reader-understand-great-beginnings-part-i/#comment-1363</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kristen Lamb]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 27 Sep 2010 20:32:48 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2010/09/how-do-you-hook-a-reader-understand-great-beginnings-part-i/#comment-1362&quot;&gt;comingeast&lt;/a&gt;.

Wow, thanks. I will have to stop by :D.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2010/09/how-do-you-hook-a-reader-understand-great-beginnings-part-i/#comment-1362">comingeast</a>.</p>
<p>Wow, thanks. I will have to stop by :D.</p>
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		By: comingeast		</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 27 Sep 2010 19:48:57 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Excellent post.  I&#039;m so glad I found you.  You are on my blogroll.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent post.  I&#8217;m so glad I found you.  You are on my blogroll.</p>
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		By: Kristen Lamb		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2010/09/how-do-you-hook-a-reader-understand-great-beginnings-part-i/#comment-1361</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kristen Lamb]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 24 Sep 2010 13:13:24 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2010/09/how-do-you-hook-a-reader-understand-great-beginnings-part-i/#comment-1360&quot;&gt;vertebraequeen&lt;/a&gt;.

Even if your main character is a super hero or a spy, they will still have what is &quot;normal&quot; for them. A lot will depend on genre. Thrillers and suspense novels generally begin with prologues (to be discussed Monday) or a chapter that will introduce the problem. Then we likely will see a glimpse of what that &quot;hero&quot; does every day. In James Rollins&#039;s &quot;Doomsday Key&quot; for instance, the first chapter is very similar to &quot;Da Vinci&quot; code. It begins with a murder. But, the first chapter that introduces the protagonist is different. We see &quot;normal world&quot; as members of Sigma are racing each other on high-speed motorcycles, unaware the inciting incident has occured. They are having fun when it is interrupted by...news of the inciting incident. This allows the reader to see that the members of Sigma are normal, but in an extraordinary way. In &quot;Black Order&quot; the main hero is running surveillance when he is introduced.

Serial killer books frequently begin with the murder from the perspective of the murderer. The next scene is our cop protagonist showing up at a crime scene, which is what they do. Working homicides is their unique normal world. Is it weird for me (a writer) to be at a homocide scene (ok, one NOT in my head)? Yes. But for a homocide detective, that is another day at the office. We get to see how she approaches her job on a daily basis....until she realizes this is no normal killing. Make sense?

Now, make no mistake, these types of stories will kick into high gear quickly, but we have to have a few pages to get our bearings. If you begin in the middle of a battle or an action scene, your audience will feel as if they got tossed into a dog-fighting arena with no warning. I hope this helps, and I am really glad you like the blog and find it helpful :D.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2010/09/how-do-you-hook-a-reader-understand-great-beginnings-part-i/#comment-1360">vertebraequeen</a>.</p>
<p>Even if your main character is a super hero or a spy, they will still have what is &#8220;normal&#8221; for them. A lot will depend on genre. Thrillers and suspense novels generally begin with prologues (to be discussed Monday) or a chapter that will introduce the problem. Then we likely will see a glimpse of what that &#8220;hero&#8221; does every day. In James Rollins&#8217;s &#8220;Doomsday Key&#8221; for instance, the first chapter is very similar to &#8220;Da Vinci&#8221; code. It begins with a murder. But, the first chapter that introduces the protagonist is different. We see &#8220;normal world&#8221; as members of Sigma are racing each other on high-speed motorcycles, unaware the inciting incident has occured. They are having fun when it is interrupted by&#8230;news of the inciting incident. This allows the reader to see that the members of Sigma are normal, but in an extraordinary way. In &#8220;Black Order&#8221; the main hero is running surveillance when he is introduced.</p>
<p>Serial killer books frequently begin with the murder from the perspective of the murderer. The next scene is our cop protagonist showing up at a crime scene, which is what they do. Working homicides is their unique normal world. Is it weird for me (a writer) to be at a homocide scene (ok, one NOT in my head)? Yes. But for a homocide detective, that is another day at the office. We get to see how she approaches her job on a daily basis&#8230;.until she realizes this is no normal killing. Make sense?</p>
<p>Now, make no mistake, these types of stories will kick into high gear quickly, but we have to have a few pages to get our bearings. If you begin in the middle of a battle or an action scene, your audience will feel as if they got tossed into a dog-fighting arena with no warning. I hope this helps, and I am really glad you like the blog and find it helpful :D.</p>
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		By: vertebraequeen		</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 24 Sep 2010 11:25:58 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[What if your main character isn&#039;t normal? How can a writer hook a reader with a not normal character, like a spy or a super hero? I think the main character having relatable reactions and emotions to an unusual situation can hook, but I am not a lit agent nor have I been published. I was wondering what your take on it is.
I love reading your blog by the way. It is full of really useful information that never would have crossed my mind before. Thank you!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What if your main character isn&#8217;t normal? How can a writer hook a reader with a not normal character, like a spy or a super hero? I think the main character having relatable reactions and emotions to an unusual situation can hook, but I am not a lit agent nor have I been published. I was wondering what your take on it is.<br />
I love reading your blog by the way. It is full of really useful information that never would have crossed my mind before. Thank you!</p>
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