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		By: Escalate Story Tension with Dirty Fighting &#124; SecuritySlags		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] More on the perils of back story1 by Kristen [&#8230;]]]></description>
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		By: lalouziane		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[lalouziane]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 12 Feb 2016 20:04:11 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[As a new writer, I really enjoy reading your blog posts. I laughed out loud at this one. Thank you so much!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As a new writer, I really enjoy reading your blog posts. I laughed out loud at this one. Thank you so much!</p>
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		By: Why Should Your Characters Fight? &#124; Writers In The Storm		</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Feb 2016 12:02:08 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] More on the perils of back story by Kristen [&#8230;]]]></description>
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		By: jrfrontera		</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Sep 2014 18:11:15 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Reblogged this on &lt;a href=&quot;http://jrfrontera.wordpress.com/2014/09/24/deadly-sin-of-writing-4-beware-the-bog-of-back-story/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;J. R. FRONTERA&lt;/a&gt; and commented:
A rampant discussion among my writer&#039;s group just lately ... how to handle backstory?  What is too much?  Too little?  Are flashbacks and dreams to convey relevant events ever okay?  And then we found this excellent post by the brilliant Kristen Lamb!  I think she says it perfectly: ]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Reblogged this on <a href="http://jrfrontera.wordpress.com/2014/09/24/deadly-sin-of-writing-4-beware-the-bog-of-back-story/" rel="nofollow">J. R. FRONTERA</a> and commented:<br />
A rampant discussion among my writer&#8217;s group just lately &#8230; how to handle backstory?  What is too much?  Too little?  Are flashbacks and dreams to convey relevant events ever okay?  And then we found this excellent post by the brilliant Kristen Lamb!  I think she says it perfectly: </p>
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		By: J is for Jargon &#124; Alex Hurst		</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Apr 2014 10:28:01 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] backstory &#8211; (n) see back in my day, we had to trudge through the snow fifteen miles, BOTH ways. [&#8230;]]]></description>
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		By: Stephanie Ward		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Stephanie Ward]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 19 Nov 2013 01:31:58 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I hope that it&#039;s ok to ask a question on a thread thats a couple years old.  I was googling &quot;writing backstories&quot; and your site popped up :).  I understand about not bogging down a plot with irrelevancy, however, What if the story starts &quot;in medias res&quot; ?  &quot;To prepare for the future they must learn from the past&quot;. Is the basis for what I&#039;m writing. Thank you in advance for any advice or opinion you have :).]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I hope that it&#8217;s ok to ask a question on a thread thats a couple years old.  I was googling &#8220;writing backstories&#8221; and your site popped up :).  I understand about not bogging down a plot with irrelevancy, however, What if the story starts &#8220;in medias res&#8221; ?  &#8220;To prepare for the future they must learn from the past&#8221;. Is the basis for what I&#8217;m writing. Thank you in advance for any advice or opinion you have :).</p>
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		By: The Week in Favs….. &#124; Melinda S. Collins		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[The Week in Favs….. &#124; Melinda S. Collins]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 24 Mar 2013 19:35:47 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[...] “Deadly Sin of Writing #4 – Beware the Bog of Back Story” by Kristen Lamb. This particular article is in addition to another one that was done earlier this [...]]]></description>
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		By: Ramp Up The Fight To Amp Up The Tension &#124; Writers In The Storm Blog		</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 20 Jun 2012 11:07:16 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[...] [For a rundown of the perils of Back Story, read this post by Kristen Lamb.] [...]]]></description>
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		By: Dr Anne		</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 02 Sep 2011 05:20:05 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I appreciate this article and the examples given.
I know not to write backstory, however I have an assignment to write a backstory for a character,(for my writing group) to 1000 words, and am finding it hard, ie to get to 1000 words.
I also have a problem describing the character in 3rd person, many of the sentences start with &#039;she&#039; or the character&#039;s name, hard. I just made her meet a stranger in a cafe so may include some dialogue.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I appreciate this article and the examples given.<br />
I know not to write backstory, however I have an assignment to write a backstory for a character,(for my writing group) to 1000 words, and am finding it hard, ie to get to 1000 words.<br />
I also have a problem describing the character in 3rd person, many of the sentences start with &#8216;she&#8217; or the character&#8217;s name, hard. I just made her meet a stranger in a cafe so may include some dialogue.</p>
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		By: Ding! Ding! More Cowbell Rings for Round 2 of Dirty Fighting&#8230; &#124; Jenny Hansen&#039;s Blog		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Ding! Ding! More Cowbell Rings for Round 2 of Dirty Fighting&#8230; &#124; Jenny Hansen&#039;s Blog]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Aug 2011 10:33:09 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[...] what the fight is about (though it will be included in your wordcount). Remember Kristen Lamb’s Backstory advice&#8230;we really just want the [...]]]></description>
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