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	Comments on: Structure Part 2&#8211;Plot Problems&#8211;Falcor the Luck Dragon &#038; the Purple Tornado	</title>
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		By: Spice Up Your Fiction&#8211;Simple Ways to Create Page-Turning Conflict &#171; Kristen Lamb&#039;s Blog		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Spice Up Your Fiction&#8211;Simple Ways to Create Page-Turning Conflict &#171; Kristen Lamb&#039;s Blog]]></dc:creator>
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					<description><![CDATA[[...] and car chases and super high-stakes on page one are what I like to call a Purple Tornado. Nothing wrong with any of these events, but they must be placed correctly in the narrative [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] and car chases and super high-stakes on page one are what I like to call a Purple Tornado. Nothing wrong with any of these events, but they must be placed correctly in the narrative [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: star silver		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[I love almost everything you write and have found it most useful.

However, for the sake of integrity, I have to disagree with you about the use of Falcor in the novel and film versions of The Neverending Story.  In that particular fairy tale style of story, Falcor works for the same reason that a fairy godmother works in a proper fairy tale (or Aslan works in the Narnia chronicles, most of which only make sense as fairy tales).  In the story, Falcor functions expressly as an overt deus ex machina (the character all but refers to himself as one) specifically as a metaphor for the divine parent that Bastian the reader is still clinging to -- which is why, towards the end of the movie, Atreyu loses Falcor and has to survive with almost everything around him dead, even the protection the universe once gave him.  It reminds one not a little of the death of the Narrator in Sondheim&#039;s Into the Woods.

Ootherwise, I agree with you about luck dragons.  Frankly, I don&#039;t how anyone but a Michael Ende or C. S. Lewis could handle one correctly, and even Ende used the tactic for one chronicle while Lewis used it as a metaphor for the Christ.  In many ways, the success of Falcor in The Neverending Story serves as an example of the rare times when someone can get away with violating the rules that we all should follow almost every other time.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I love almost everything you write and have found it most useful.</p>
<p>However, for the sake of integrity, I have to disagree with you about the use of Falcor in the novel and film versions of The Neverending Story.  In that particular fairy tale style of story, Falcor works for the same reason that a fairy godmother works in a proper fairy tale (or Aslan works in the Narnia chronicles, most of which only make sense as fairy tales).  In the story, Falcor functions expressly as an overt deus ex machina (the character all but refers to himself as one) specifically as a metaphor for the divine parent that Bastian the reader is still clinging to &#8212; which is why, towards the end of the movie, Atreyu loses Falcor and has to survive with almost everything around him dead, even the protection the universe once gave him.  It reminds one not a little of the death of the Narrator in Sondheim&#8217;s Into the Woods.</p>
<p>Ootherwise, I agree with you about luck dragons.  Frankly, I don&#8217;t how anyone but a Michael Ende or C. S. Lewis could handle one correctly, and even Ende used the tactic for one chronicle while Lewis used it as a metaphor for the Christ.  In many ways, the success of Falcor in The Neverending Story serves as an example of the rare times when someone can get away with violating the rules that we all should follow almost every other time.</p>
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		By: Blurb and structure &#124; Edward M. Grant		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Blurb and structure &#124; Edward M. Grant]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Feb 2012 03:33:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		By: Your Health! &#171; Kate Wood&#039;s Blog		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Your Health! &#171; Kate Wood&#039;s Blog]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 Nov 2011 12:04:04 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[...] ~ Part Two: Plot Problems ~ Falcor the Luck Dragon &#038; the Purple Tornado; [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] ~ Part Two: Plot Problems ~ Falcor the Luck Dragon &amp; the Purple Tornado; [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: Structure Part 5&#8211;Keeping Focused &#38; Nailing the Pitch&#8211;Understand Your &#8220;Seed Idea&#8221; &#171; Kristen Lamb&#039;s Blog		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Structure Part 5&#8211;Keeping Focused &#38; Nailing the Pitch&#8211;Understand Your &#8220;Seed Idea&#8221; &#171; Kristen Lamb&#039;s Blog]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Nov 2011 14:19:34 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[...] we discussed plot on a micro-scale. Week two we panned back for an aerial shot, and discussed common plot problems that arise from a flawed structure. Week three we discussed the single most important component to [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] we discussed plot on a micro-scale. Week two we panned back for an aerial shot, and discussed common plot problems that arise from a flawed structure. Week three we discussed the single most important component to [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: Structure Part 4&#8211;Testing Your Idea&#8211;Is it Strong Enough to Make an Interesting Novel? &#171; Kristen Lamb&#039;s Blog		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Structure Part 4&#8211;Testing Your Idea&#8211;Is it Strong Enough to Make an Interesting Novel? &#171; Kristen Lamb&#039;s Blog]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 24 Oct 2011 14:40:44 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[...] have been discussing story structure. Part I of this series introduced the novel on a micro-scale. Part II explored the big picture and offered an overview of common plot problems. Part III introduced the [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] have been discussing story structure. Part I of this series introduced the novel on a micro-scale. Part II explored the big picture and offered an overview of common plot problems. Part III introduced the [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: Wodke Hawkinson		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Wodke Hawkinson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 20 Oct 2011 18:31:51 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This clarifies a problem with which I have been struggling. The event at the beginning of my book is horrific. So, how to top that? You have given me a lot to think about. Thanks!  -K]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This clarifies a problem with which I have been struggling. The event at the beginning of my book is horrific. So, how to top that? You have given me a lot to think about. Thanks!  -K</p>
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		By: A.F. White (@albrtwhite)		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[A.F. White (@albrtwhite)]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 19 Oct 2011 16:45:51 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[It&#039;s amazing how similar plot structure is to a chess game.  Like a good story, a game of chess has an opening, a middle game, and an endgame.

During the opening, players develop their pieces, protect their king, and set up future attacks.

Most of the action takes place during the middle game.  Pieces are exchanged, plots are devised and foiled, and traps are set.

The game comes to a close during the endgame.  After the dust has cleared the few remaining pieces fight it out for final victory.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s amazing how similar plot structure is to a chess game.  Like a good story, a game of chess has an opening, a middle game, and an endgame.</p>
<p>During the opening, players develop their pieces, protect their king, and set up future attacks.</p>
<p>Most of the action takes place during the middle game.  Pieces are exchanged, plots are devised and foiled, and traps are set.</p>
<p>The game comes to a close during the endgame.  After the dust has cleared the few remaining pieces fight it out for final victory.</p>
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		By: NaNoWriMo Prep Week 3: Plot &#38; Structure &#171; Novel Novice		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[NaNoWriMo Prep Week 3: Plot &#38; Structure &#171; Novel Novice]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 18 Oct 2011 10:26:32 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[...] This blog post at the Warrior Writers blog is the first in a series about structure. Look for new entries every Monday. (here&#8217;s Part 2.) [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] This blog post at the Warrior Writers blog is the first in a series about structure. Look for new entries every Monday. (here&#8217;s Part 2.) [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: Structure Part 3&#8211;Introducing the Opposition &#171; Kristen Lamb&#039;s Blog		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Structure Part 3&#8211;Introducing the Opposition &#171; Kristen Lamb&#039;s Blog]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 17 Oct 2011 14:22:50 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[...] The stronger the structure, the better the story. I highly recommend that you read Part I and Part II of this series, if you haven&#8217;t already in that each lesson builds upon the previous [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] The stronger the structure, the better the story. I highly recommend that you read Part I and Part II of this series, if you haven&#8217;t already in that each lesson builds upon the previous [&#8230;]</p>
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