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		By: Amanda		</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Jan 2012 23:51:53 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This article was very helpful. Especially the &#039;thousand caracters&#039; bit; not that I have a thousand characters (only an even dozen) lol with only 6 of them being the main cast &#038; the rest being important background characters (I&#039;m also making a note not to name any others) but escentially the problem I&#039;m having is all subtextual. I&#039;ve got ummm 5 I think... plots going on at once &#038; I was wondering if you could do a blog on what to look out for, or how to steer properly when you&#039;ve got one main plot &#038; 4 subplots going on. :) thx muchly]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This article was very helpful. Especially the &#8216;thousand caracters&#8217; bit; not that I have a thousand characters (only an even dozen) lol with only 6 of them being the main cast &amp; the rest being important background characters (I&#8217;m also making a note not to name any others) but escentially the problem I&#8217;m having is all subtextual. I&#8217;ve got ummm 5 I think&#8230; plots going on at once &amp; I was wondering if you could do a blog on what to look out for, or how to steer properly when you&#8217;ve got one main plot &amp; 4 subplots going on. 🙂 thx muchly</p>
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		By: Monday Mentions: Pet Resolutions &#38; Lotsa Links &#171; Amy Shojai&#039;s Blog		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Monday Mentions: Pet Resolutions &#38; Lotsa Links &#171; Amy Shojai&#039;s Blog]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 02 Jan 2012 14:59:14 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[...] 5 Common Writing Hazards from Kristen Lamb [...]]]></description>
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		By: Mind Sieve 1/2/12 &#171; Gloria Oliver		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Mind Sieve 1/2/12 &#171; Gloria Oliver]]></dc:creator>
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					<description><![CDATA[[...] 5 Common Writing Hazards from Kristen Lamb. Great list! [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] 5 Common Writing Hazards from Kristen Lamb. Great list! [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: Sharing is Caring: My Weekly Finds &#8211; The Rocking New Year Edition &#124; Barbara McDowell&#039;s Blog		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sharing is Caring: My Weekly Finds &#8211; The Rocking New Year Edition &#124; Barbara McDowell&#039;s Blog]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 01 Jan 2012 19:28:53 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[...] Lamb&#8217;s 5 Common Writing Hazards is a great reminder of errors that writers can slip up on.  Like &#8220;adverbs are [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] Lamb&#8217;s 5 Common Writing Hazards is a great reminder of errors that writers can slip up on.  Like &#8220;adverbs are [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: Author Kristen Lamb		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2011/12/5-common-writing-hazards/#comment-14402</link>

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		<pubDate>Sun, 01 Jan 2012 15:29:30 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2011/12/5-common-writing-hazards/#comment-14401&quot;&gt;Jo Stray&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks. So happy people think I&#039;m funny. Makes all the years of being shoved in lockers worthwhile :D.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2011/12/5-common-writing-hazards/#comment-14401">Jo Stray</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks. So happy people think I&#8217;m funny. Makes all the years of being shoved in lockers worthwhile :D.</p>
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		By: Jo Stray		</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 01 Jan 2012 13:25:04 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Kristen, someone told me to visit your blog to see an example of humorous writing. I may have to start writing blogs in my next role so wanted to examine those written by the experts!

I actually laughed out loud at this blog!  Hysterical!  The bit that particularly made me guffaw was &#039;Painful and Alien Movement of Body Parts&#039; - it conjured up brilliant visions!

I&#039;ll keep reading your blogs to pick up excellent tips.  Thanks Kristen.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Kristen, someone told me to visit your blog to see an example of humorous writing. I may have to start writing blogs in my next role so wanted to examine those written by the experts!</p>
<p>I actually laughed out loud at this blog!  Hysterical!  The bit that particularly made me guffaw was &#8216;Painful and Alien Movement of Body Parts&#8217; &#8211; it conjured up brilliant visions!</p>
<p>I&#8217;ll keep reading your blogs to pick up excellent tips.  Thanks Kristen.</p>
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		By: Ingrid Schaffenburg		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Ingrid Schaffenburg]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Dec 2011 18:04:20 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Awesome advice. Thanks Kristen!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Awesome advice. Thanks Kristen!</p>
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		By: redjim99		</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2011 21:45:10 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2011/12/5-common-writing-hazards/#comment-14398&quot;&gt;Author Kristen Lamb&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks Kirsten,

I will look at the book.  I think I need to write out the plot ideas more fully.  That way I may find the direction I need.

Here&#039;s hoping

Jim]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2011/12/5-common-writing-hazards/#comment-14398">Author Kristen Lamb</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks Kirsten,</p>
<p>I will look at the book.  I think I need to write out the plot ideas more fully.  That way I may find the direction I need.</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s hoping</p>
<p>Jim</p>
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		By: Author Kristen Lamb		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Author Kristen Lamb]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2011 21:21:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2011/12/5-common-writing-hazards/#comment-14397&quot;&gt;redjim99&lt;/a&gt;.

Watch movies to improve your dialogue. Also if you aren&#039;t plotting properly ahead of time, it can leave you straining for filler because you really aren&#039;t sure where you are going. Get Larry Brook&#039;s Story Engineering and Save the Cat. Good references that should help.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2011/12/5-common-writing-hazards/#comment-14397">redjim99</a>.</p>
<p>Watch movies to improve your dialogue. Also if you aren&#8217;t plotting properly ahead of time, it can leave you straining for filler because you really aren&#8217;t sure where you are going. Get Larry Brook&#8217;s Story Engineering and Save the Cat. Good references that should help.</p>
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		By: redjim99		</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2011 21:07:19 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[My biggest problems are continuity and word count.  I have always struggled to extend stories and provide believable dialogue to help move a story forward.  Short stories tend to be kind of monologues, and longer pieces fragment and become disjointed.

So many problems, I will read and improve this year.

Jim]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My biggest problems are continuity and word count.  I have always struggled to extend stories and provide believable dialogue to help move a story forward.  Short stories tend to be kind of monologues, and longer pieces fragment and become disjointed.</p>
<p>So many problems, I will read and improve this year.</p>
<p>Jim</p>
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