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		By: The Story in the Telling &#124; The Rose Coloured Lens		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[The Story in the Telling &#124; The Rose Coloured Lens]]></dc:creator>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] Closely related to relatability (see what I did there?), Immersion is one of the most important aspects of a good story. If you feel like you&#8217;re there, standing next to the character, experiencing what they experience, feeling what they feel.. you will remember that story. Kristen Lamb shares her experiences with editing in her blog post. [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] Closely related to relatability (see what I did there?), Immersion is one of the most important aspects of a good story. If you feel like you&#8217;re there, standing next to the character, experiencing what they experience, feeling what they feel.. you will remember that story. Kristen Lamb shares her experiences with editing in her blog post. [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: Sunday Sampler: March 31, 2013 &#124; shanjeniah		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sunday Sampler: March 31, 2013 &#124; shanjeniah]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 31 Mar 2013 10:01:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		By: Daniel Escurel Occeno		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Daniel Escurel Occeno]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Mar 2013 22:07:04 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/02/immerse-the-reader-in-your-world-never-let-them-up-for-air/#comment-29415&quot;&gt;Lou&lt;/a&gt;.

I was written a critique on a forum for writers that I used too much dialogue and not enough one-man-show narrative. But I agree with you and your source. I prefer to tell (write) the story or the novel with dialogues.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/02/immerse-the-reader-in-your-world-never-let-them-up-for-air/#comment-29415">Lou</a>.</p>
<p>I was written a critique on a forum for writers that I used too much dialogue and not enough one-man-show narrative. But I agree with you and your source. I prefer to tell (write) the story or the novel with dialogues.</p>
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		By: Lou		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lou]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Mar 2013 20:52:38 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Another way to talk about this is through summary and scene.

From Janet Burroway&#039;s  WRITING FICTION

&quot;Scene:  Scene is to time what concrete detail is to the senses;  it is the crucial means of allowing your reader to experience the story.

Scene is action (and often dialogue, but not always.  You can have a scene without dialogue ) that takes place over a set period of &quot;real&quot; time.  It allows the reader to see, hear and sense the story&#039;s drama moment-to-moment.  One of the most common errors beginning writers make is to summarize events rather than realize them as moments.&quot;

http://www.unm.edu/~gmartin/handouts/craftfeatures.htm]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Another way to talk about this is through summary and scene.</p>
<p>From Janet Burroway&#8217;s  WRITING FICTION</p>
<p>&#8220;Scene:  Scene is to time what concrete detail is to the senses;  it is the crucial means of allowing your reader to experience the story.</p>
<p>Scene is action (and often dialogue, but not always.  You can have a scene without dialogue ) that takes place over a set period of &#8220;real&#8221; time.  It allows the reader to see, hear and sense the story&#8217;s drama moment-to-moment.  One of the most common errors beginning writers make is to summarize events rather than realize them as moments.&#8221;</p>
<p><a href="http://www.unm.edu/~gmartin/handouts/craftfeatures.htm" rel="nofollow ugc">http://www.unm.edu/~gmartin/handouts/craftfeatures.htm</a></p>
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		By: allanholender		</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Mar 2013 05:49:58 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Reblogged this on &lt;a href=&quot;http://musingsofpapazen.com/2013/03/07/immerse-the-reader-in-your-world-never-let-them-up-for-air/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Musings Of Papa Zen&lt;/a&gt; and commented:
Writing is like giving birth. First you conceive the idea, carry it around with you for a while and then deliver it. Once you birth a book it&#039;s a miraculous feeling. What I wasn&#039;t ready for was the post partum depression after it was published.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Reblogged this on <a href="http://musingsofpapazen.com/2013/03/07/immerse-the-reader-in-your-world-never-let-them-up-for-air/" rel="nofollow">Musings Of Papa Zen</a> and commented:<br />
Writing is like giving birth. First you conceive the idea, carry it around with you for a while and then deliver it. Once you birth a book it&#8217;s a miraculous feeling. What I wasn&#8217;t ready for was the post partum depression after it was published.</p>
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		By: teemtwo		</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 04 Mar 2013 03:33:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Excellent post. After reading it I went immediately to a paragraph in my manuscript and changed this:

&quot;Lenna marched over to the girl and smacked her so hard that she nearly fell backwards. All of the others couldn&#039;t believe their eyes. The girl had too much pride to cry and held her face for a few moments then stood to face the cook&quot;

to this:

&quot;Without a warning, the elder cook rushed to the girl, raised her right hand up above her, landing it across her left cheek with so much force, the girl staggered backwards. All of the others stood where they were, speechless. The young cook&#039;s pride alone was enough of a dam to keep tears from her face. She raised her hands to the left side of her face for a moment, then dropped them and faced Leena as if she was ready to strike her back.&quot;

Thanks,

TK McEachin
www.theelementsbooks.com]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent post. After reading it I went immediately to a paragraph in my manuscript and changed this:</p>
<p>&#8220;Lenna marched over to the girl and smacked her so hard that she nearly fell backwards. All of the others couldn&#8217;t believe their eyes. The girl had too much pride to cry and held her face for a few moments then stood to face the cook&#8221;</p>
<p>to this:</p>
<p>&#8220;Without a warning, the elder cook rushed to the girl, raised her right hand up above her, landing it across her left cheek with so much force, the girl staggered backwards. All of the others stood where they were, speechless. The young cook&#8217;s pride alone was enough of a dam to keep tears from her face. She raised her hands to the left side of her face for a moment, then dropped them and faced Leena as if she was ready to strike her back.&#8221;</p>
<p>Thanks,</p>
<p>TK McEachin<br />
<a href="http://www.theelementsbooks.com" rel="nofollow ugc">http://www.theelementsbooks.com</a></p>
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		By: teemtwo		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[teemtwo]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 04 Mar 2013 03:21:51 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/02/immerse-the-reader-in-your-world-never-let-them-up-for-air/#comment-29359&quot;&gt;Gwen&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks for the recommendation!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/02/immerse-the-reader-in-your-world-never-let-them-up-for-air/#comment-29359">Gwen</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks for the recommendation!</p>
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		By: Friday Features #46 - YESENIA VARGAS		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Friday Features #46 - YESENIA VARGAS]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 04 Mar 2013 02:16:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		By: beccapuglisi		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[beccapuglisi]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Feb 2013 19:03:59 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Kristen, I loved seeing the examples from your writing on how to really draw the reader in and create that reader-character bond. This is definitely something we&#039;ll be addressing in our webinar, so thanks for the plug ;)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Kristen, I loved seeing the examples from your writing on how to really draw the reader in and create that reader-character bond. This is definitely something we&#8217;ll be addressing in our webinar, so thanks for the plug 😉</p>
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		By: Thirsty Thursday Blog Round-Up - Writing, Reading, and Life		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Thirsty Thursday Blog Round-Up - Writing, Reading, and Life]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Feb 2013 11:02:39 +0000</pubDate>
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