Comments on: 5 Red Flags Your Story Needs Revision https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/5-red-flags-your-story-needs-revision/ Author, Blogger, Social Media Jedi Thu, 20 Jun 2013 10:13:09 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.5.8 By: Her eyes followed his gaze around the room | Francis James Franklin (Alina Meridon) https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/5-red-flags-your-story-needs-revision/#comment-30961 Thu, 20 Jun 2013 10:13:09 +0000 http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=10524#comment-30961 […] while back, Kristen Lamb posted 5 Red Flags Your Story Needs Revision. I have a lot of respect for her advice, even if I’m not very good at taking it. […]

]]> By: Mary Ann https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/5-red-flags-your-story-needs-revision/#comment-30960 Tue, 09 Apr 2013 03:43:05 +0000 http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=10524#comment-30960 Another great post! Very timely for me 🙂 Thanks Kristen.

]]> By: Pablo Said So | Indies Unlimited https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/5-red-flags-your-story-needs-revision/#comment-30959 Mon, 08 Apr 2013 12:00:31 +0000 http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=10524#comment-30959 […] and to challenge my own thoughts about them. The most recent appeared in Kristen Lamb’s blog, Five Red Flags Your Story Needs Revision. Kristen has a great blog site. She and her guests have a lot of good things to say. I recommend […]

]]> By: melissazehner https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/5-red-flags-your-story-needs-revision/#comment-30958 Mon, 08 Apr 2013 06:10:56 +0000 http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=10524#comment-30958 Loved the discussion about avoiding adverbs! Stephen King has a line I love: “I believe the road to hell is paved with adverbs.”

]]> By: kristinkingauthor https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/5-red-flags-your-story-needs-revision/#comment-30957 Sun, 07 Apr 2013 03:19:11 +0000 http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=10524#comment-30957 I find myself intrigued with the Emotion Thesaurus you mention. I tend to describe facial responses to indicate emotions a lot.

Also–this is good timing, b/c I’m considering killing a character that I didn’t name before which I’ll definitely do now.

]]> By: kristinkingauthor https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/5-red-flags-your-story-needs-revision/#comment-30956 Sun, 07 Apr 2013 02:57:22 +0000 http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=10524#comment-30956 Reblogged this on Kristin King Author and commented:
Oh my…nailed!

]]> By: RachelB. https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/5-red-flags-your-story-needs-revision/#comment-30955 Wed, 03 Apr 2013 21:04:34 +0000 http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=10524#comment-30955 Loved this article!

]]> By: Terrible Tip Tuesday: Writing Advice to Ignore | kiralynblue https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/5-red-flags-your-story-needs-revision/#comment-30954 Tue, 02 Apr 2013 16:57:47 +0000 http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=10524#comment-30954 […] fellow blogger KD DID IT found the article! Go check out Kristen Lamb’s post on 5 Red Flags Your Story Needs Revision to see the other side of the argument plus 4 other tips that aren’t remotely terrible. Even […]

]]> By: April 2013 Hodgepodge | KD DID IT Takes on Books https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/5-red-flags-your-story-needs-revision/#comment-30953 Tue, 02 Apr 2013 01:32:24 +0000 http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=10524#comment-30953 […] Lamb has another post, “5 Red Flags“, that repeats her complaint about the […]

]]> By: Friday Features #48, #49, #50 - YESENIA VARGAS https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/5-red-flags-your-story-needs-revision/#comment-30952 Mon, 01 Apr 2013 20:04:59 +0000 http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=10524#comment-30952 […] 5 Red Flags Your Story Needs Revision | Kristen Lamb’s Blog […]

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