Comments on: The Clock is Ticking—5 Tips for Tighter, Cleaner Writing https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/the-clock-is-ticking-5-tips-for-tighter-cleaner-writing/ Author, Blogger, Social Media Jedi Wed, 08 Jan 2014 02:36:56 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.5.8 By: Interesting Links | Prem Rao https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/the-clock-is-ticking-5-tips-for-tighter-cleaner-writing/#comment-30462 Wed, 08 Jan 2014 02:36:56 +0000 http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=10400#comment-30462 […] to improve your writing? Who doesn’t? Check out these tips shared by Kristen Lamb in her blog titled, what else but ” Kristen Lamb’s Blog.” […]

]]> By: Interesting Links | Writing To Be Read https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/the-clock-is-ticking-5-tips-for-tighter-cleaner-writing/#comment-30461 Sat, 20 Apr 2013 09:50:30 +0000 http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=10400#comment-30461 […] to improve your writing? Who doesn’t? Check out these tips shared by Kristen Lamb in her blog titled, what else but ” Kristen Lamb’s Blog.” […]

]]> By: jbglazer https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/the-clock-is-ticking-5-tips-for-tighter-cleaner-writing/#comment-30460 Wed, 10 Apr 2013 01:36:33 +0000 http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=10400#comment-30460 As a first time author I found your post very informative. I often wondered what sorts of things editors look for. This is a great start!

]]> By: Chaplain Winston T. Muldrew https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/the-clock-is-ticking-5-tips-for-tighter-cleaner-writing/#comment-30459 Mon, 08 Apr 2013 18:15:08 +0000 http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=10400#comment-30459 In reply to Author Kristen Lamb.

I think I mention to you before that I will never be able to write a novel. I was a computer programmer turned writer. I was part of a Think Tank so I just did my part and they paid me for my thoughts and ideas. Often I would think out side of the box and do something nobody thought of.

Now after thousands of lines of thoughts I find myself again outside the box trying to gain acceptance.

]]> By: Chaplain Winston T. Muldrew https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/the-clock-is-ticking-5-tips-for-tighter-cleaner-writing/#comment-30458 Mon, 08 Apr 2013 18:03:14 +0000 http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=10400#comment-30458 In reply to Author Kristen Lamb.

Jack London Square was my favorite hang out place. I wrote this piece some time ago. I am so glad I wrote this piece as I did for the tragedy is Jack London Square is no more. I have only this jaded memory committed to writing.

That is the point. There is no hook but descriptions of the day as we enjoyed each other. It was a moment we will always remember. I am afraid if I change it readers will miss the point. If you read the whole of it you might have been able to spend the day with us. It is on my blog.

]]> By: dinavidscuitee https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/the-clock-is-ticking-5-tips-for-tighter-cleaner-writing/#comment-30457 Wed, 03 Apr 2013 19:38:58 +0000 http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=10400#comment-30457 In reply to Author Kristen Lamb.

Too much for the beginning of a novel.

]]> By: Author Kristen Lamb https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/the-clock-is-ticking-5-tips-for-tighter-cleaner-writing/#comment-30456 Wed, 03 Apr 2013 14:12:53 +0000 http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=10400#comment-30456 In reply to dinavidscuitee.

Too much for what?

]]> By: dinavidscuitee https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/the-clock-is-ticking-5-tips-for-tighter-cleaner-writing/#comment-30455 Wed, 03 Apr 2013 13:45:24 +0000 http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=10400#comment-30455 Is four characters too much?

]]> By: Friday Features #48, #49, #50 - YESENIA VARGAS https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/the-clock-is-ticking-5-tips-for-tighter-cleaner-writing/#comment-30454 Mon, 01 Apr 2013 20:04:11 +0000 http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=10400#comment-30454 […] The Clock is Ticking—5 Tips for Tighter, Cleaner Writing | Kristen Lamb’s Blog […]

]]> By: Nicky Moxey https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/03/the-clock-is-ticking-5-tips-for-tighter-cleaner-writing/#comment-30453 Sat, 30 Mar 2013 23:11:43 +0000 http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=10400#comment-30453 My daughter – an artist – is always complaining that my protagonist is too much “in his head”. I try!

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