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	Comments on: What Star Wars &#034;A New Hope&#034; Can Teach Us About In Medias Res	</title>
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		By: nikkiharvey		</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Apr 2014 18:41:09 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/07/what-star-wars-a-new-hope-can-teach-us-about-in-medias-res-2/#comment-37204&quot;&gt;Author Kristen Lamb&lt;/a&gt;.

Ah yes, it starts with an everyday problem rather than an end of the world problem, makes a lot more sense now, thanks :)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/07/what-star-wars-a-new-hope-can-teach-us-about-in-medias-res-2/#comment-37204">Author Kristen Lamb</a>.</p>
<p>Ah yes, it starts with an everyday problem rather than an end of the world problem, makes a lot more sense now, thanks 🙂</p>
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		By: Author Kristen Lamb		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Author Kristen Lamb]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Apr 2014 18:29:28 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/07/what-star-wars-a-new-hope-can-teach-us-about-in-medias-res-2/#comment-37203&quot;&gt;nikkiharvey&lt;/a&gt;.

You start with SOME kind of conflict (a problem) that makes us sympathetic to the protagonist and foreshadows the overall story problem ahead. For instance, I am working on a trilogy. The first scene of the first book is my protagonist walking into the Unemployment office after months of being unable to get a job (problem, we empathize). Within five pages, we find out she can&#039;t get a job because she has been blackballed (bigger problem). Her being blackballed is directly linked to the overall story problem (her dirtbag ex pulled an Enron and left her as the FBI&#039;s prime suspect and she has to clear her name to get her life back). But in the beginning, she isn&#039;t diffusing a bomb or in a car chase, she is simply in a real, human conflict. Make sense?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/07/what-star-wars-a-new-hope-can-teach-us-about-in-medias-res-2/#comment-37203">nikkiharvey</a>.</p>
<p>You start with SOME kind of conflict (a problem) that makes us sympathetic to the protagonist and foreshadows the overall story problem ahead. For instance, I am working on a trilogy. The first scene of the first book is my protagonist walking into the Unemployment office after months of being unable to get a job (problem, we empathize). Within five pages, we find out she can&#8217;t get a job because she has been blackballed (bigger problem). Her being blackballed is directly linked to the overall story problem (her dirtbag ex pulled an Enron and left her as the FBI&#8217;s prime suspect and she has to clear her name to get her life back). But in the beginning, she isn&#8217;t diffusing a bomb or in a car chase, she is simply in a real, human conflict. Make sense?</p>
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		By: nikkiharvey		</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Apr 2014 17:22:26 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[So I read your post from today and commented that I would love more advice on getting the balance between too much action and enough happening to hook the reader. I saw someone else had commented something similar and you directed them to this post. I&#039;ve read the entire thing and still don&#039;t get it. Maybe it&#039;s because I&#039;ve never seen Star Wars.
This is my Star Wars knowledge: there&#039;s darth vader who speaks weird in a black mask and says &#039;I am your father&#039; to one of the good guys and there&#039;s the big bear like thing called Wookie.
But I like the magician analogy. You don&#039;t want to start with the assistant already floating, but you don&#039;t want the strings and wires either. But applying it to my writing is where I get lost. I&#039;m going to have to spend more time thinking this over.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So I read your post from today and commented that I would love more advice on getting the balance between too much action and enough happening to hook the reader. I saw someone else had commented something similar and you directed them to this post. I&#8217;ve read the entire thing and still don&#8217;t get it. Maybe it&#8217;s because I&#8217;ve never seen Star Wars.<br />
This is my Star Wars knowledge: there&#8217;s darth vader who speaks weird in a black mask and says &#8216;I am your father&#8217; to one of the good guys and there&#8217;s the big bear like thing called Wookie.<br />
But I like the magician analogy. You don&#8217;t want to start with the assistant already floating, but you don&#8217;t want the strings and wires either. But applying it to my writing is where I get lost. I&#8217;m going to have to spend more time thinking this over.</p>
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		By: Lauren Craig		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lauren Craig]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Aug 2013 01:44:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		By: Miss Alexandrina		</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Jul 2013 13:13:18 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This is such a good point. Whilst I&#039;ve never been keen on starting in the middle of melodrama, I am prone to the Dickensian setting of scene (because, as a reader, I enjoy Dickens a lot). So, this is useful in hunting for that necessary balance. And using nerdy examples wins hands down!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is such a good point. Whilst I&#8217;ve never been keen on starting in the middle of melodrama, I am prone to the Dickensian setting of scene (because, as a reader, I enjoy Dickens a lot). So, this is useful in hunting for that necessary balance. And using nerdy examples wins hands down!</p>
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		By: Author Kristen Lamb		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Author Kristen Lamb]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Jul 2013 15:21:05 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/07/what-star-wars-a-new-hope-can-teach-us-about-in-medias-res-2/#comment-37199&quot;&gt;Scott Seldon&lt;/a&gt;.

I use it because it&#039;s HOW we meet the protagonist. The opening battle would be the equivalent of a prologue) since this is &quot;technically&quot; the fourth installment in a series and there is NO WAY I am using an example from the prequels unless I am talking about what NOT to do, LOL. But a lot of writers try to introduce the protagonist in the gun battle. In this case, life wad very mundane for Luke. He had to have a call to action and make a choice. We HAVE to see his normal world to know WHAT has been disrupted by the antagonist&#039;s agenda.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/07/what-star-wars-a-new-hope-can-teach-us-about-in-medias-res-2/#comment-37199">Scott Seldon</a>.</p>
<p>I use it because it&#8217;s HOW we meet the protagonist. The opening battle would be the equivalent of a prologue) since this is &#8220;technically&#8221; the fourth installment in a series and there is NO WAY I am using an example from the prequels unless I am talking about what NOT to do, LOL. But a lot of writers try to introduce the protagonist in the gun battle. In this case, life wad very mundane for Luke. He had to have a call to action and make a choice. We HAVE to see his normal world to know WHAT has been disrupted by the antagonist&#8217;s agenda.</p>
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		By: Scott Seldon		</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Jul 2013 14:22:44 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Wonderful post. I have to say that I have found the exact same thing to be true. You have to find that sweet spot where you have a strong opening scene to hook the readers without it being overpowering. Your example of Luke Skywalker is on the nose. For those who have seen the deleted scenes included with the Blu-ray, you&#039;ll know that there was an earlier set of scenes with Luke that really didn&#039;t add anything. They were a great introduction and showed Luke at work and with his friends, but that wasn&#039;t key to the story. Fun to watch, but not necessary.

That said, I have to say that Star Wars: Episode IV A New Hope is a poor example of this. While Luke&#039;s story does match exactly what you were getting at, the movie does not. It starts with a space battle followed in short order by a massive blaster fight between Storm Troopers and Rebels. In the midst of that we meet R2-D2 and C-3PO, Princess Leia, and Darth Vader, long before we get to the surface of Tatooine. A New Hope does exactly what you are advising not to do; it begins with a bang and then slows down for a long time before the Millenium Falcon blasts its way out of Mos Eisley and the action really picks up. Lucas used a neat trick for A New Hope; he followed the two droids and introduced each subsequent character one at a time. First Leia and Darth Vader (who intersect again later), then Luke, Ben, Han &#038; Chewy. That was the biggest reason he cut the earlier scenes with Luke. The second movie (considered the best by many) is a much better example. We star with a probe landing on Hoth and Luke investigating and a conversation with Han over the comlink. Good establishing character moment before Luke gets hit by the Wampa. Return of the Jedi similarly starts slow. A New Hope starts with two bangs before it ever gets to Luke and a good character building moment. In fact of all 6 movies, it starts with the biggest bang and least character development (though perhaps the most for our Laurel and Hardy-esque droids).]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wonderful post. I have to say that I have found the exact same thing to be true. You have to find that sweet spot where you have a strong opening scene to hook the readers without it being overpowering. Your example of Luke Skywalker is on the nose. For those who have seen the deleted scenes included with the Blu-ray, you&#8217;ll know that there was an earlier set of scenes with Luke that really didn&#8217;t add anything. They were a great introduction and showed Luke at work and with his friends, but that wasn&#8217;t key to the story. Fun to watch, but not necessary.</p>
<p>That said, I have to say that Star Wars: Episode IV A New Hope is a poor example of this. While Luke&#8217;s story does match exactly what you were getting at, the movie does not. It starts with a space battle followed in short order by a massive blaster fight between Storm Troopers and Rebels. In the midst of that we meet R2-D2 and C-3PO, Princess Leia, and Darth Vader, long before we get to the surface of Tatooine. A New Hope does exactly what you are advising not to do; it begins with a bang and then slows down for a long time before the Millenium Falcon blasts its way out of Mos Eisley and the action really picks up. Lucas used a neat trick for A New Hope; he followed the two droids and introduced each subsequent character one at a time. First Leia and Darth Vader (who intersect again later), then Luke, Ben, Han &amp; Chewy. That was the biggest reason he cut the earlier scenes with Luke. The second movie (considered the best by many) is a much better example. We star with a probe landing on Hoth and Luke investigating and a conversation with Han over the comlink. Good establishing character moment before Luke gets hit by the Wampa. Return of the Jedi similarly starts slow. A New Hope starts with two bangs before it ever gets to Luke and a good character building moment. In fact of all 6 movies, it starts with the biggest bang and least character development (though perhaps the most for our Laurel and Hardy-esque droids).</p>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Jul 2013 08:43:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		By: Katie Cross		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Katie Cross]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Jul 2013 23:33:51 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Great article! I loved the roller coaster comparison. I love adding another trick in my hat bag of writing. Thanks Kristin!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great article! I loved the roller coaster comparison. I love adding another trick in my hat bag of writing. Thanks Kristin!</p>
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		By: Author Kristen Lamb		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Author Kristen Lamb]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Jul 2013 19:06:11 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/07/what-star-wars-a-new-hope-can-teach-us-about-in-medias-res-2/#comment-37195&quot;&gt;Vanessa&lt;/a&gt;.

Use it later as a prequel.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2013/07/what-star-wars-a-new-hope-can-teach-us-about-in-medias-res-2/#comment-37195">Vanessa</a>.</p>
<p>Use it later as a prequel.</p>
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