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		By: Abundance of Knowledge if you&#8217;re Writing that Novel &#124; louise welch		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Abundance of Knowledge if you&#8217;re Writing that Novel &#124; louise welch]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 24 Apr 2015 20:31:25 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/2014/04/17/five-warning-signs-your-story-needs-revision/ [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] <a href="https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/2014/04/17/five-warning-signs-your-story-needs-revision/" rel="nofollow ugc">https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/2014/04/17/five-warning-signs-your-story-needs-revision/</a> [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: emmawicker		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[emmawicker]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 06 Jul 2014 02:53:28 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Helpful AND hilarious. Thank you, I am sure I will return to this particular blog post time and again.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Helpful AND hilarious. Thank you, I am sure I will return to this particular blog post time and again.</p>
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		By: agrrosewood		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[agrrosewood]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 02 Jun 2014 15:02:35 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This is all so true - especially the part about the &lt;b&gt;evil&lt;b /&gt; adverbs. I&#039;ve heard other writers claim that adverbs should never be used, but sometimes you can&#039;t do without - unless the extra information is not necessary.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is all so true &#8211; especially the part about the <b>evil<b></b> adverbs. I&#8217;ve heard other writers claim that adverbs should never be used, but sometimes you can&#8217;t do without &#8211; unless the extra information is not necessary.</b></p>
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		By: Sue Kesler		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sue Kesler]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 May 2014 19:06:30 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Back story or no back story, tell all first chapter, nice to see a balanced point of view]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Back story or no back story, tell all first chapter, nice to see a balanced point of view</p>
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		By: Roundup April 2014 &#124; Kathryn Goldman		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Roundup April 2014 &#124; Kathryn Goldman]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 04 May 2014 14:18:58 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] Five Warning Signs Your Story Needs Revision by Kristen Lamb on warriorwriters.wordpress.com April 17, 2014. Writing craft advice on spotting the need for an editor. [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] Five Warning Signs Your Story Needs Revision by Kristen Lamb on warriorwriters.wordpress.com April 17, 2014. Writing craft advice on spotting the need for an editor. [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: melaniedawnn		</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 01 May 2014 20:24:57 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Reblogged this on &lt;a href=&quot;http://melaniedawnn.wordpress.com/2014/05/01/five-warning-signs-your-story-needs-revision/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Musings by Melanie Dawnn&lt;/a&gt;.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Reblogged this on <a href="http://melaniedawnn.wordpress.com/2014/05/01/five-warning-signs-your-story-needs-revision/" rel="nofollow">Musings by Melanie Dawnn</a>.</p>
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		By: Topic Tuesday: Revisions &#124; Modern Belles of History		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Topic Tuesday: Revisions &#124; Modern Belles of History]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 29 Apr 2014 12:23:06 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] Five Warning Signs Your Story Needs Revision &#8211; Kristen Lamb My Number One Tip from the Revision Trenches &#8211; The Lucky 13s How to Revise A Novel &#8211; Holly Lisle Revisions: Rewriting, Editing, Proof-reading&#8230;Oh My! &#8211; Ally Blake [&#8230;]]]></description>
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		By: Gerri		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Gerri]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 28 Apr 2014 18:46:46 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Kristen, I love your blog. I&#039;m going to follow you and learn a lot! I not only blogged about your site, I linked back to it, and I bought your book: Rise of the Machines: Human Authors in a Digital World. I realized how badly I needed it, you have 35,0000 plus followers, I have 86!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Kristen, I love your blog. I&#8217;m going to follow you and learn a lot! I not only blogged about your site, I linked back to it, and I bought your book: Rise of the Machines: Human Authors in a Digital World. I realized how badly I needed it, you have 35,0000 plus followers, I have 86!</p>
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		By: Marti Melville		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2014/04/five-warning-signs-your-story-needs-revision/#comment-48465</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Marti Melville]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 27 Apr 2014 09:42:15 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Reblogged this on &lt;a href=&quot;http://martimelville.wordpress.com/2014/04/27/five-warning-signs-your-story-needs-revision/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Musings of a Writer&lt;/a&gt; and commented:
Excellent tips for writers!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Reblogged this on <a href="http://martimelville.wordpress.com/2014/04/27/five-warning-signs-your-story-needs-revision/" rel="nofollow">Musings of a Writer</a> and commented:<br />
Excellent tips for writers!</p>
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		By: Marti Melville		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2014/04/five-warning-signs-your-story-needs-revision/#comment-48464</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Marti Melville]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 27 Apr 2014 09:40:36 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Thank you for the excellent points made in your article.  I&#039;m a huge fan of Save the Cat and after reading that you also endorse that book, it motivates me to reevaluate my own writing again using your suggestions.  I&#039;ve forwarded this article to many of my favorite writers and sites as a result.

Again thanks!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you for the excellent points made in your article.  I&#8217;m a huge fan of Save the Cat and after reading that you also endorse that book, it motivates me to reevaluate my own writing again using your suggestions.  I&#8217;ve forwarded this article to many of my favorite writers and sites as a result.</p>
<p>Again thanks!</p>
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