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		By: Carl R. Moore		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Carl R. Moore]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Sep 2015 08:12:40 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Love the detail and the bit about the senses. Rhythm &#039; s a writing skill too often overlooked.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Love the detail and the bit about the senses. Rhythm &#8216; s a writing skill too often overlooked.</p>
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		By: Good article by Kristen Lamb on tighter writing &#124; Richard Snow Writer		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Good article by Kristen Lamb on tighter writing &#124; Richard Snow Writer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 13 Jul 2015 04:16:32 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] Kristen Lamb regularly produces some blog post with excellent advice for writers on writing technique, and the use of social media for writers. here&#8217;s a re-blog on a recent post of hers. https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/2015/04/17/ten-ways-to-tighten-your-writing-hook-the-reader/ [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] Kristen Lamb regularly produces some blog post with excellent advice for writers on writing technique, and the use of social media for writers. here&#8217;s a re-blog on a recent post of hers. <a href="https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/2015/04/17/ten-ways-to-tighten-your-writing-hook-the-reader/" rel="nofollow ugc">https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/2015/04/17/ten-ways-to-tighten-your-writing-hook-the-reader/</a> [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: kmcmcurtis7		</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 29 May 2015 19:11:56 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Reblogged this on &lt;a href=&quot;https://kmcmcurtis7.wordpress.com/2015/05/29/ten-ways-to-tighten-your-writing-hook-the-reader/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;One Door Closes, Another One Opens&lt;/a&gt; and commented:
Though I am not pursuing a writing career, this can apply to blogs, emails, work, etc.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Reblogged this on <a href="https://kmcmcurtis7.wordpress.com/2015/05/29/ten-ways-to-tighten-your-writing-hook-the-reader/" rel="nofollow">One Door Closes, Another One Opens</a> and commented:<br />
Though I am not pursuing a writing career, this can apply to blogs, emails, work, etc.</p>
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		By: kmcmcurtis7		</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 29 May 2015 19:10:24 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I really loved this.  I&#039;m not actually trying to be a writer, but this applies to just blogs in general.  Thanks for the insight!!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I really loved this.  I&#8217;m not actually trying to be a writer, but this applies to just blogs in general.  Thanks for the insight!!</p>
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		By: ninakimani11		</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 22 May 2015 07:33:45 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Reblogged this on &lt;a href=&quot;https://ninakimaniblog.wordpress.com/2015/05/22/ten-ways-to-tighten-your-writing-hook-the-reader/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;ninakimani11&#039;s Blog&lt;/a&gt;.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Reblogged this on <a href="https://ninakimaniblog.wordpress.com/2015/05/22/ten-ways-to-tighten-your-writing-hook-the-reader/" rel="nofollow">ninakimani11&#039;s Blog</a>.</p>
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		By: ninakimani11		</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 22 May 2015 07:32:52 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This has helped me :-) Thanks for the well Writen points. :-)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This has helped me 🙂 Thanks for the well Writen points. 🙂</p>
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		By: Annie		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Annie]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 May 2015 18:07:15 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Loved the info. My husband is a purple belt in BJJ and I practice Krav Maga. I have dabbed in BJJ but everyone is 100 lbs heavier than me and I much rather be on my feet even if I got someone in my guard but I do love BJJ as well.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Loved the info. My husband is a purple belt in BJJ and I practice Krav Maga. I have dabbed in BJJ but everyone is 100 lbs heavier than me and I much rather be on my feet even if I got someone in my guard but I do love BJJ as well.</p>
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		By: katkent2014		</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 04 May 2015 20:42:15 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Reblogged this on &lt;a href=&quot;https://writersback.wordpress.com/2015/05/04/ten-ways-to-tighten-your-writing-hook-the-reader/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;writersback&lt;/a&gt; and commented:
Great Article by Kristen Lamb on writing tighter prose.  &quot;We are book-readers not mind-readers.&quot;  Love this.  ]]></description>
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Great Article by Kristen Lamb on writing tighter prose.  &#8220;We are book-readers not mind-readers.&#8221;  Love this.  </p>
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		By: katkent2014		</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 04 May 2015 20:39:03 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Kristen, I am an offender of all the tips you mentioned when I first started writing books in 2010.  It really is true:  the more you write, the better it gets.  Some tips have become second nature now and I enjoy the writing process even more.  Some I work on everyday.  When I edit my own writing, I think of sentences as frills on a fussy looking ball gown.  Rip off all those extra frills and what you have left is an elegant and exciting gown, sure to make your date or audience (editor, agent, publisher) drool.  Great article and I learned alot during the Antagonist web class on 4/18.  I&#039;ve looked up several &quot;log lines&quot; of movies like my book and it helped.  Thank you.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Kristen, I am an offender of all the tips you mentioned when I first started writing books in 2010.  It really is true:  the more you write, the better it gets.  Some tips have become second nature now and I enjoy the writing process even more.  Some I work on everyday.  When I edit my own writing, I think of sentences as frills on a fussy looking ball gown.  Rip off all those extra frills and what you have left is an elegant and exciting gown, sure to make your date or audience (editor, agent, publisher) drool.  Great article and I learned alot during the Antagonist web class on 4/18.  I&#8217;ve looked up several &#8220;log lines&#8221; of movies like my book and it helped.  Thank you.</p>
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		By: No Wasted Ink Writer&#8217;s Links &#124; No Wasted Ink		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[No Wasted Ink Writer&#8217;s Links &#124; No Wasted Ink]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 04 May 2015 16:00:16 +0000</pubDate>
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