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		By: More Tips for Addressing &#34;Too Much Dialogue&#34; - Kathy Rewrites		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] very helpful this post showing 8 dialogue problems and how to fix them by Louise Hornby and this post on how to fix common dialogue problems by Kristen Lamb/Alex Limberg. I started blogging because I [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] very helpful this post showing 8 dialogue problems and how to fix them by Louise Hornby and this post on how to fix common dialogue problems by Kristen Lamb/Alex Limberg. I started blogging because I [&#8230;]</p>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Links to Blog Posts on Writing &#8211; May 2016 &#124; Anna Butler]]></dc:creator>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] How Strong is Your Dialogue? How to Fix Common Dialogue Problems and Making Fiction Come Alive! Using the Senses for Maximum Impact – Alex Limburg guesting at Kristen Lamb’s blog. [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] How Strong is Your Dialogue? How to Fix Common Dialogue Problems and Making Fiction Come Alive! Using the Senses for Maximum Impact – Alex Limburg guesting at Kristen Lamb’s blog. [&#8230;]</p>
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					<description><![CDATA[Reblogged this on &lt;a href=&quot;https://dave94015.wordpress.com/2016/05/09/how-strong-is-your-dialogue-how-to-fix-common-dialogue-problems/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;dave94015&lt;/a&gt; and commented:
tips on how to liven up your writing dialog!]]></description>
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tips on how to liven up your writing dialog!</p>
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		By: Top Picks Thursday! For Readers and Writers 05-05-2016 &#124; The Author Chronicles		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] if you want a strong character arc, you should start writing from the end, Alex Limberg show us how to fix common dialogue problems, and Frank Richardson explores the art of the long [&#8230;]]]></description>
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		By: lonestarjake88		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[Number 3 is something I always struggle with. I, myself, am a very logical person, so I always want to write like I&#039;m talking like Spock. My wife will read my stuff and say, &quot;Your characters rarely use &#039;fun words.&#039;&quot; I am trying to get better. LoL!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Number 3 is something I always struggle with. I, myself, am a very logical person, so I always want to write like I&#8217;m talking like Spock. My wife will read my stuff and say, &#8220;Your characters rarely use &#8216;fun words.'&#8221; I am trying to get better. LoL!</p>
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		By: Soooz		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[Reblogged this on &lt;a href=&quot;https://sooozburkeauthor.wordpress.com/2016/05/03/how-strong-is-your-dialogue-how-to-fix-common-dialogue-problems/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;S Burke. Author&lt;/a&gt; and commented:
A marvelous insight into the world of dialogue writing. Pitfalls and other monstrous things to be aware of.]]></description>
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A marvelous insight into the world of dialogue writing. Pitfalls and other monstrous things to be aware of.</p>
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		By: Sierra Michaels		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[Thanks Alex for this blog.  I&#039;ll have to look at my dialogue a bit closer, and I&#039;m always open for a critique.  I finished my second book and two agents are considering my full MS.  Thanks again, I could use some professional advice.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Alex for this blog.  I&#8217;ll have to look at my dialogue a bit closer, and I&#8217;m always open for a critique.  I finished my second book and two agents are considering my full MS.  Thanks again, I could use some professional advice.</p>
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		By: Mind Sieve 5/2/16 &#8211; Gloria Oliver		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] How Strong is Your Dialogue? How to Fix Common Dialogue Problems by Alex Limberg at Kristen Lamb&#8217;s blog. [&#8230;]]]></description>
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		By: Chris		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2016/04/how-strong-is-your-dialogue-how-to-fix-common-dialogue-problems/#comment-65971&quot;&gt;Cathy F.&lt;/a&gt;.

Hi Cathy, In fiction, dialogue is preferable to blocks of solid text.
Readers are enticed by ‘open’ looking pages with lots of ‘white’ because they aren’t as daunting.

Another published author read through a novel of mine, prior to publication, and gave me one piece of great advice… ‘Show, don’t tell’. (Yes… one of the golden rules, but I&#039;d let it slip).
If you need to give background details, and other ‘facts’, let them come out in conversation between the characters - even if you have to contrive a scene as an excuse for two to meet and talk. (but don’t make it feel like they are lecturing each other. People don’t talk like that).

Have them bounce questions and ideas off each other, so that the details you require the reader to know (as clues to a mystery, maybe?)  get revealed in the questions and answers.
 Even throwaway comments and jibes about other (absent) characters, and responses to those jibes can inform the reader. Writing these scenes can be a lot of fun.

There are readers (especially of action novels) who scan through the descriptive pieces to get to the action. They read dialogue because they perceive that to be ‘action’.

I had a test reader who liked a book but didn’t understand the ending (‘Who shot him?’, she asked.) I’d seeded the clues in the details, and she’d missed them by scanning. I went back into the novel and dropped in more clues and identifiers that hopefully the reader would remember when the time came.
Readers who read this way are more likely to pick up these pointers if they are given in dialogue.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2016/04/how-strong-is-your-dialogue-how-to-fix-common-dialogue-problems/#comment-65971">Cathy F.</a>.</p>
<p>Hi Cathy, In fiction, dialogue is preferable to blocks of solid text.<br />
Readers are enticed by ‘open’ looking pages with lots of ‘white’ because they aren’t as daunting.</p>
<p>Another published author read through a novel of mine, prior to publication, and gave me one piece of great advice… ‘Show, don’t tell’. (Yes… one of the golden rules, but I&#8217;d let it slip).<br />
If you need to give background details, and other ‘facts’, let them come out in conversation between the characters &#8211; even if you have to contrive a scene as an excuse for two to meet and talk. (but don’t make it feel like they are lecturing each other. People don’t talk like that).</p>
<p>Have them bounce questions and ideas off each other, so that the details you require the reader to know (as clues to a mystery, maybe?)  get revealed in the questions and answers.<br />
 Even throwaway comments and jibes about other (absent) characters, and responses to those jibes can inform the reader. Writing these scenes can be a lot of fun.</p>
<p>There are readers (especially of action novels) who scan through the descriptive pieces to get to the action. They read dialogue because they perceive that to be ‘action’.</p>
<p>I had a test reader who liked a book but didn’t understand the ending (‘Who shot him?’, she asked.) I’d seeded the clues in the details, and she’d missed them by scanning. I went back into the novel and dropped in more clues and identifiers that hopefully the reader would remember when the time came.<br />
Readers who read this way are more likely to pick up these pointers if they are given in dialogue.</p>
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