<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?><rss version="2.0"
	xmlns:content="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/content/"
	xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/"
	xmlns:atom="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom"
	xmlns:sy="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/syndication/"
	
	xmlns:georss="http://www.georss.org/georss"
	xmlns:geo="http://www.w3.org/2003/01/geo/wgs84_pos#"
	
	>
<channel>
	<title>
	Comments on: Description&#8212;Writer Crack &#038; Finding the Write Balance	</title>
	<atom:link href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/02/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/feed/" rel="self" type="application/rss+xml" />
	<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/02/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/</link>
	<description>Author, Blogger, Social Media Jedi</description>
	<lastBuildDate>Fri, 14 Apr 2017 13:14:21 +0000</lastBuildDate>
	<sy:updatePeriod>
	hourly	</sy:updatePeriod>
	<sy:updateFrequency>
	1	</sy:updateFrequency>
	<generator>https://wordpress.org/?v=6.8.8</generator>
	<item>
		<title>
		By: Oops! Hold on. You&#8217;re Newbie is Showing. &#8211; Kristen Lamb		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/02/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/#comment-74258</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Oops! Hold on. You&#8217;re Newbie is Showing. &#8211; Kristen Lamb]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Apr 2017 13:14:21 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid isPermaLink="false">https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=20985#comment-74258</guid>

					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] of describing every detail of the room. Describing the weather. Description, though, should always be serving the plot and doing more than taking up [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] of describing every detail of the room. Describing the weather. Description, though, should always be serving the plot and doing more than taking up [&#8230;]</p>
]]></content:encoded>
		
			</item>
		<item>
		<title>
		By: Writing Links 2/2717 &#8211; Where Genres Collide		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/02/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/#comment-71192</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Writing Links 2/2717 &#8211; Where Genres Collide]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 27 Feb 2017 12:01:39 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid isPermaLink="false">https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=20985#comment-71192</guid>

					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/2017/02/20/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/ What type of a descriptor are you? Light, heavy? Medium? I tend to start light and layer more in as the drafts progress. [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] <a href="https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/2017/02/20/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/" rel="nofollow ugc">https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/2017/02/20/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/</a> What type of a descriptor are you? Light, heavy? Medium? I tend to start light and layer more in as the drafts progress. [&#8230;]</p>
]]></content:encoded>
		
			</item>
		<item>
		<title>
		By: Top Picks Thursday! For Writers &#38; Readers 02-23-2017 &#124; The Author Chronicles		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/02/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/#comment-71191</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Top Picks Thursday! For Writers &#38; Readers 02-23-2017 &#124; The Author Chronicles]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 23 Feb 2017 18:01:50 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid isPermaLink="false">https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=20985#comment-71191</guid>

					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] get to the nitty-gritty, we have to pay attention to the smaller elements. Kristen Lamb discusses description and how to get it right, and Word Wise Tips shows how to find and fix passive voice in your [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] get to the nitty-gritty, we have to pay attention to the smaller elements. Kristen Lamb discusses description and how to get it right, and Word Wise Tips shows how to find and fix passive voice in your [&#8230;]</p>
]]></content:encoded>
		
			</item>
		<item>
		<title>
		By: ellenchauvet		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/02/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/#comment-71190</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[ellenchauvet]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Feb 2017 20:41:49 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid isPermaLink="false">https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=20985#comment-71190</guid>

					<description><![CDATA[Reblogged this on &lt;a href=&quot;https://ellenchauvet.wordpress.com/2017/02/22/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Erotic Vampire&lt;/a&gt;.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Reblogged this on <a href="https://ellenchauvet.wordpress.com/2017/02/22/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/" rel="nofollow">Erotic Vampire</a>.</p>
]]></content:encoded>
		
			</item>
		<item>
		<title>
		By: familytreedet		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/02/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/#comment-71189</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[familytreedet]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Feb 2017 18:06:56 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid isPermaLink="false">https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=20985#comment-71189</guid>

					<description><![CDATA[Great tips for writers.  I am a novice and I am always looking for ways to improve my writing skills.  I am also a Maberry fan, but it was his comic work that I followed.  I will have to keep your tips in mind.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great tips for writers.  I am a novice and I am always looking for ways to improve my writing skills.  I am also a Maberry fan, but it was his comic work that I followed.  I will have to keep your tips in mind.</p>
]]></content:encoded>
		
			</item>
		<item>
		<title>
		By: hahiestand		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/02/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/#comment-71188</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[hahiestand]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Feb 2017 18:45:45 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid isPermaLink="false">https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=20985#comment-71188</guid>

					<description><![CDATA[Great description examples!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great description examples!</p>
]]></content:encoded>
		
			</item>
		<item>
		<title>
		By: Don Massenzio		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/02/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/#comment-71187</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Don Massenzio]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Feb 2017 16:11:46 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid isPermaLink="false">https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=20985#comment-71187</guid>

					<description><![CDATA[Reblogged this on &lt;a href=&quot;https://donmassenzio.wordpress.com/2017/02/21/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Don Massenzio&#039;s Blog&lt;/a&gt; and commented:
Here is an excellent post from Kristen Lamb on the pitfalls of writing descriptions. ]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Reblogged this on <a href="https://donmassenzio.wordpress.com/2017/02/21/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/" rel="nofollow">Don Massenzio&#039;s Blog</a> and commented:<br />
Here is an excellent post from Kristen Lamb on the pitfalls of writing descriptions. </p>
]]></content:encoded>
		
			</item>
		<item>
		<title>
		By: sharablesarcasm		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/02/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/#comment-71186</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[sharablesarcasm]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Feb 2017 08:37:49 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid isPermaLink="false">https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=20985#comment-71186</guid>

					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/02/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/#comment-71173&quot;&gt;Linda Maye Adams&lt;/a&gt;.

I agree, Linda. Description should tell us a lot about the character doing the describing, and the one being described.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/02/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/#comment-71173">Linda Maye Adams</a>.</p>
<p>I agree, Linda. Description should tell us a lot about the character doing the describing, and the one being described.</p>
]]></content:encoded>
		
			</item>
		<item>
		<title>
		By: sharablesarcasm		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/02/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/#comment-71185</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[sharablesarcasm]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Feb 2017 08:36:06 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid isPermaLink="false">https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=20985#comment-71185</guid>

					<description><![CDATA[OMG Kristen, in the section on info-dumps you just described perfectly the reason I DNF (Did Not Finish) the copy of Charles Dickens&#039; Great Expectations I was *supposed* to read in high school. There was a scene where EVERY INCH OF A ROOM was described in intense detail. The pattern on the curtains. Each piece of furniture. The pattern on the bedspread. The stuff siting on the table. NONE OF WHICH HAD ANYTHING TO DO WITH THE PLOT. Granted, I realize Dickens wrote at a time when there was no TV or internet or (I shudder at the thought) social media, so if people found a book boring they were probably going to keep reading anyway, because what was the alternative? Stare at the wall for an hour? Today, I don&#039;t think Dickens could sell that book, JMHO.

I personally don&#039;t love to read a lot of description UNLESS the author just manages to describe things in a way I find insanely funny or interesting. Most authors don&#039;t. So a lot of the time, when I see a long stretch of description, I&#039;m probably going to skip over it until I get to the next piece of dialogue or action. That&#039;s just me. I also probably write a little light on description for the same reason—if I find it boring to read, I&#039;m not going to write it and bore my readers.

As far as weather goes, I think it&#039;s fine to describe if it has something to do with the story. If it&#039;s going to rain on Romeo and Juliet&#039;s wedding day, hell yeah, tell us there are clouds in the sky or something. But if it really has nothing to do with the story, I don&#039;t much care about the weather.

I maintain that Charles Dickens was wordy and desperately needed an editor, I don&#039;t care how famous he is.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>OMG Kristen, in the section on info-dumps you just described perfectly the reason I DNF (Did Not Finish) the copy of Charles Dickens&#8217; Great Expectations I was *supposed* to read in high school. There was a scene where EVERY INCH OF A ROOM was described in intense detail. The pattern on the curtains. Each piece of furniture. The pattern on the bedspread. The stuff siting on the table. NONE OF WHICH HAD ANYTHING TO DO WITH THE PLOT. Granted, I realize Dickens wrote at a time when there was no TV or internet or (I shudder at the thought) social media, so if people found a book boring they were probably going to keep reading anyway, because what was the alternative? Stare at the wall for an hour? Today, I don&#8217;t think Dickens could sell that book, JMHO.</p>
<p>I personally don&#8217;t love to read a lot of description UNLESS the author just manages to describe things in a way I find insanely funny or interesting. Most authors don&#8217;t. So a lot of the time, when I see a long stretch of description, I&#8217;m probably going to skip over it until I get to the next piece of dialogue or action. That&#8217;s just me. I also probably write a little light on description for the same reason—if I find it boring to read, I&#8217;m not going to write it and bore my readers.</p>
<p>As far as weather goes, I think it&#8217;s fine to describe if it has something to do with the story. If it&#8217;s going to rain on Romeo and Juliet&#8217;s wedding day, hell yeah, tell us there are clouds in the sky or something. But if it really has nothing to do with the story, I don&#8217;t much care about the weather.</p>
<p>I maintain that Charles Dickens was wordy and desperately needed an editor, I don&#8217;t care how famous he is.</p>
]]></content:encoded>
		
			</item>
		<item>
		<title>
		By: Description&#8212;Writer Crack &#38; Finding the Write Balance &#124; ugiridharaprasad		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/02/description-writer-crack-finding-the-write-balance/#comment-71184</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Description&#8212;Writer Crack &#38; Finding the Write Balance &#124; ugiridharaprasad]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Feb 2017 05:19:43 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid isPermaLink="false">https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/?p=20985#comment-71184</guid>

					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] Source: Description&#8212;Writer Crack &#038; Finding the Write Balance [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] Source: Description&#8212;Writer Crack &amp; Finding the Write Balance [&#8230;]</p>
]]></content:encoded>
		
			</item>
	</channel>
</rss>

<!--
Performance optimized by W3 Total Cache. Learn more: https://www.boldgrid.com/w3-total-cache/?utm_source=w3tc&utm_medium=footer_comment&utm_campaign=free_plugin

Object Caching 81/111 objects using Redis
Page Caching using Disk: Enhanced 

Served from: authorkristenlamb.com @ 2026-08-14 12:38:40 by W3 Total Cache
-->