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		By: Janice McLachlan		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/08/six-simple-reasons-our-story-sucks-how-to-fix-it/#comment-86257</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Janice McLachlan]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 08 Dec 2017 23:16:08 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Since it&#039;s never too late to comment, here goes. I left this post in my inbox, as a timely reminder, and ever since the first read I have been upping the stakes and increasing the conflict. Yes, I am a firm believer of avoiding conflict in real life and this was colouring my stories. THANK YOU. Not to mention your advice on the difference between a premise and plot. Now I&#039;m blushing.

I follow many blogs and facebook writing groups but this is the one I look forward to most and invariable gain the most from. Please don&#039;t stop posting.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Since it&#8217;s never too late to comment, here goes. I left this post in my inbox, as a timely reminder, and ever since the first read I have been upping the stakes and increasing the conflict. Yes, I am a firm believer of avoiding conflict in real life and this was colouring my stories. THANK YOU. Not to mention your advice on the difference between a premise and plot. Now I&#8217;m blushing.</p>
<p>I follow many blogs and facebook writing groups but this is the one I look forward to most and invariable gain the most from. Please don&#8217;t stop posting.</p>
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		By: Angela Randak		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Angela Randak]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Oct 2017 14:51:03 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/08/six-simple-reasons-our-story-sucks-how-to-fix-it/#comment-83689&quot;&gt;Sylvia&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/08/six-simple-reasons-our-story-sucks-how-to-fix-it/#comment-83689">Sylvia</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
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		By: Kristen Lamb		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kristen Lamb]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 18 Oct 2017 12:36:39 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/08/six-simple-reasons-our-story-sucks-how-to-fix-it/#comment-83689&quot;&gt;Sylvia&lt;/a&gt;.

Never be sorry for a late comment. I work my tail off for these posts and you guys commenting fuels my passion and drive and is more appreciated than y&#039;all could ever know. THANK YOU Sylvia for your gift (a very valuable one)....your TIME ((HUGS)).]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/08/six-simple-reasons-our-story-sucks-how-to-fix-it/#comment-83689">Sylvia</a>.</p>
<p>Never be sorry for a late comment. I work my tail off for these posts and you guys commenting fuels my passion and drive and is more appreciated than y&#8217;all could ever know. THANK YOU Sylvia for your gift (a very valuable one)&#8230;.your TIME ((HUGS)).</p>
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		By: Sylvia		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/08/six-simple-reasons-our-story-sucks-how-to-fix-it/#comment-83689</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sylvia]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 18 Oct 2017 09:22:05 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/08/six-simple-reasons-our-story-sucks-how-to-fix-it/#comment-80283&quot;&gt;Angela Randak&lt;/a&gt;.

If it is a Romance then the reader know it is &quot;happily ever after&quot; you don&#039;t need to tell them. Sorry for the late comment but only just got around to reading this excellent post.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/08/six-simple-reasons-our-story-sucks-how-to-fix-it/#comment-80283">Angela Randak</a>.</p>
<p>If it is a Romance then the reader know it is &#8220;happily ever after&#8221; you don&#8217;t need to tell them. Sorry for the late comment but only just got around to reading this excellent post.</p>
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		By: Rachel C. Thompson		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Rachel C. Thompson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 26 Sep 2017 19:20:25 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/08/six-simple-reasons-our-story-sucks-how-to-fix-it/#comment-80035&quot;&gt;Stephen H. King (TOSK)&lt;/a&gt;.

make him a gay son dancer want to be in a far right farming town and his family really, really needs his help.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/08/six-simple-reasons-our-story-sucks-how-to-fix-it/#comment-80035">Stephen H. King (TOSK)</a>.</p>
<p>make him a gay son dancer want to be in a far right farming town and his family really, really needs his help.</p>
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		By: I love solution oriented things. &#124; Blog of a College Writer		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[I love solution oriented things. &#124; Blog of a College Writer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Aug 2017 19:45:53 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] via Six Simple Reasons Our Story Sucks  [&#8230;]]]></description>
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		By: Angela Randak		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Angela Randak]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 Aug 2017 18:04:19 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Hi Kristen!
I have a question.  You always say that you need to be able to sum up your story in one sentence.  Is that true of romance novels, too?  It seems like I need two sentences:  one that assures us that there is a happily ever after and one for the external plot.  Thoughts?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Kristen!<br />
I have a question.  You always say that you need to be able to sum up your story in one sentence.  Is that true of romance novels, too?  It seems like I need two sentences:  one that assures us that there is a happily ever after and one for the external plot.  Thoughts?</p>
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		By: David Rogers		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/08/six-simple-reasons-our-story-sucks-how-to-fix-it/#comment-80274</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[David Rogers]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 Aug 2017 10:16:05 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Kristen, I liked this blunt, straight from the shoulder post. Very succinct, direct, and useful. Best]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Kristen, I liked this blunt, straight from the shoulder post. Very succinct, direct, and useful. Best</p>
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		By: Best of the Blogs from Christian Editing Services &#124; 12 August 2017		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Best of the Blogs from Christian Editing Services &#124; 12 August 2017]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Aug 2017 20:12:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		By: Kristen Lamb		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/08/six-simple-reasons-our-story-sucks-how-to-fix-it/#comment-80167</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kristen Lamb]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Aug 2017 20:33:32 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/08/six-simple-reasons-our-story-sucks-how-to-fix-it/#comment-80141&quot;&gt;Thomas Edmund&lt;/a&gt;.

Rotorua. I am going to go wherever I can when I am there :D .]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2017/08/six-simple-reasons-our-story-sucks-how-to-fix-it/#comment-80141">Thomas Edmund</a>.</p>
<p>Rotorua. I am going to go wherever I can when I am there 😀 .</p>
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