Comments on: Deep POV: What IS It & Why Do Readers LOVE It So Much? https://authorkristenlamb.com/2019/08/deep-pov-fiction/ Author, Blogger, Social Media Jedi Wed, 18 Sep 2019 18:23:00 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.8.6 By: Kristen Lamb https://authorkristenlamb.com/2019/08/deep-pov-fiction/#comment-113617 Wed, 18 Sep 2019 18:23:00 +0000 https://authorkristenlamb.com/?p=27171#comment-113617 In reply to Karen Phillips.

It makes first-person POV far more immersive. When you remove ALL the author fingerprints the POV is far more intense.

]]> By: Karen Phillips https://authorkristenlamb.com/2019/08/deep-pov-fiction/#comment-113616 Wed, 18 Sep 2019 17:38:56 +0000 https://authorkristenlamb.com/?p=27171#comment-113616 Hi Kristen –
Is Deep POV not needed for first person narrative?

]]> By: Jan Sikes https://authorkristenlamb.com/2019/08/deep-pov-fiction/#comment-113594 Sat, 14 Sep 2019 01:35:51 +0000 https://authorkristenlamb.com/?p=27171#comment-113594 In reply to Kristen Lamb.

Awesome, Kristen! Thank you!

]]> By: Mary K Tilghman Writes https://authorkristenlamb.com/2019/08/deep-pov-fiction/#comment-113591 Fri, 13 Sep 2019 16:21:03 +0000 https://authorkristenlamb.com/?p=27171#comment-113591 Now I am starting to feel that I understand.
Or

Now I see!

]]> By: Kristen Lamb https://authorkristenlamb.com/2019/08/deep-pov-fiction/#comment-113575 Wed, 11 Sep 2019 17:24:41 +0000 https://authorkristenlamb.com/?p=27171#comment-113575 In reply to Jan Sikes.

You can get the ON DEMAND version HERE and Deep10 for the $10 discount should still work.

]]> By: Jan Sikes https://authorkristenlamb.com/2019/08/deep-pov-fiction/#comment-113572 Wed, 11 Sep 2019 15:40:28 +0000 https://authorkristenlamb.com/?p=27171#comment-113572 This was an excellent explanation of Deep POV, Kristen. And, I clicked over to the link that said there was a class this week and find that it ended August 30th. šŸ™ I do hope you’ll offer it again. Your examples really drove the point home! I love this kind of tight writing!

]]> By: Rachel Christein Thompson https://authorkristenlamb.com/2019/08/deep-pov-fiction/#comment-113557 Thu, 05 Sep 2019 22:13:50 +0000 https://authorkristenlamb.com/?p=27171#comment-113557 You can also take out the word, “already,” and the word “and” and replace “and” with a comma. Reads faster that way. Your last example can be worked down to fewer words.

]]> By: jsgreenblog https://authorkristenlamb.com/2019/08/deep-pov-fiction/#comment-113548 Tue, 03 Sep 2019 07:22:48 +0000 https://authorkristenlamb.com/?p=27171#comment-113548 Kristen! I love this post. The fun history is spot-on. Thank you for the example of deep POV. It is what my creative writing professor, Jeanne Leiby taught, 19 years ago. I tend to write this way, and Iā€™m very glad to see you identifying it and affirming it, here. The series workshop looks interesting, and itā€™s not surprising in our Netflix and Amazon prime world. May check that class out. Thank you, again!

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]]> By: Lucas PalhĆ£o https://authorkristenlamb.com/2019/08/deep-pov-fiction/#comment-113526 Wed, 28 Aug 2019 19:10:56 +0000 https://authorkristenlamb.com/?p=27171#comment-113526 In reply to Kristen Lamb.

Awesome! I’ve never tried that!

Thanks a lot!

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