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	Comments on: Story Structure: Why Some Stories Fall Apart &#038; Fail to Hook Readers	</title>
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		By: Top Picks Thursday! For Writers &#38; Readers 11-05-2020 &#124; The Author Chronicles		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Top Picks Thursday! For Writers &#38; Readers 11-05-2020 &#124; The Author Chronicles]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 05 Nov 2020 18:02:10 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] supports you story like a skeleton. Kristen Lamb explains why some stories fall apart and fail to hook readers, K.M. Weiland explores the power of chiastic story structure (especially in a series), and Gilbert [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] supports you story like a skeleton. Kristen Lamb explains why some stories fall apart and fail to hook readers, K.M. Weiland explores the power of chiastic story structure (especially in a series), and Gilbert [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: V.M.Sang		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[V.M.Sang]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 03 Nov 2020 20:30:37 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[An excellent and helpful post. I&#039;ll be checking my current wip now, for iys structure.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>An excellent and helpful post. I&#8217;ll be checking my current wip now, for iys structure.</p>
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		By: rachelcapps		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[rachelcapps]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 31 Oct 2020 03:12:58 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2020/10/story-structure-crafting-stories-readers/#comment-114532&quot;&gt;Chuck Eyler&lt;/a&gt;.

I second that recommendation. Brilliant book :)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2020/10/story-structure-crafting-stories-readers/#comment-114532">Chuck Eyler</a>.</p>
<p>I second that recommendation. Brilliant book 🙂</p>
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		By: lesedgerton		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[lesedgerton]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Oct 2020 22:41:44 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2020/10/story-structure-crafting-stories-readers/#comment-114536&quot;&gt;Kristen Lamb&lt;/a&gt;.

Thank you so much, Kristen. I appreciate that more than you can know.  And, I&#039;l be anxious to know your opinion of Tristine&#039;s book. It is just head and shoulders above anything else I know of on the market. She shows you the various ways to structure your memoir based on your material. There are a handful of craft books I recommend--Scene and Structure and the BEST book on fiction writing ever written, WRITING FICTION by Janet Burroway. Blue skies, Les]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2020/10/story-structure-crafting-stories-readers/#comment-114536">Kristen Lamb</a>.</p>
<p>Thank you so much, Kristen. I appreciate that more than you can know.  And, I&#8217;l be anxious to know your opinion of Tristine&#8217;s book. It is just head and shoulders above anything else I know of on the market. She shows you the various ways to structure your memoir based on your material. There are a handful of craft books I recommend&#8211;Scene and Structure and the BEST book on fiction writing ever written, WRITING FICTION by Janet Burroway. Blue skies, Les</p>
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		By: Deborah Makarios		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Deborah Makarios]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Oct 2020 22:28:05 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I love structure! I just need to work on making my openings more hooky. Slow starts are my biggest weakness, reviews would seem to suggest. (I thought my biggest weakness was character, but apparently not...)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I love structure! I just need to work on making my openings more hooky. Slow starts are my biggest weakness, reviews would seem to suggest. (I thought my biggest weakness was character, but apparently not&#8230;)</p>
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		By: Kristen Lamb		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kristen Lamb]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Oct 2020 21:54:56 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2020/10/story-structure-crafting-stories-readers/#comment-114531&quot;&gt;lesedgerton&lt;/a&gt;.

Went ahead and picked up Tristine&#039;s book too since you recommended it. We are always learning, right?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2020/10/story-structure-crafting-stories-readers/#comment-114531">lesedgerton</a>.</p>
<p>Went ahead and picked up Tristine&#8217;s book too since you recommended it. We are always learning, right?</p>
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		By: Kristen Lamb		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kristen Lamb]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Oct 2020 21:53:01 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2020/10/story-structure-crafting-stories-readers/#comment-114531&quot;&gt;lesedgerton&lt;/a&gt;.

Just bought your memoir. Thanks for letting us know you had one out because I KNOW you&#039;ve lived an amazing life. You&#039;ve been an incredible mentor and inspiration. And my copy will be here SUNDAY!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2020/10/story-structure-crafting-stories-readers/#comment-114531">lesedgerton</a>.</p>
<p>Just bought your memoir. Thanks for letting us know you had one out because I KNOW you&#8217;ve lived an amazing life. You&#8217;ve been an incredible mentor and inspiration. And my copy will be here SUNDAY!</p>
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		By: Kristen Lamb		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kristen Lamb]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Oct 2020 21:50:33 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2020/10/story-structure-crafting-stories-readers/#comment-114531&quot;&gt;lesedgerton&lt;/a&gt;.

THANKS LES! Great to hear from you and I didn&#039;t realize you had a memoir. Going to go get that now! Thanks for the suggestion. You know, I&#039;ve been your acolyte for ages and I&#039;m the Structure Nazi it seems. We all have our areas of excellence but I prefer to pass the torch to my betters when I can&#039;t do the topic justice beyond a basic introduction. Lots of love! And see you in church, LOL.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2020/10/story-structure-crafting-stories-readers/#comment-114531">lesedgerton</a>.</p>
<p>THANKS LES! Great to hear from you and I didn&#8217;t realize you had a memoir. Going to go get that now! Thanks for the suggestion. You know, I&#8217;ve been your acolyte for ages and I&#8217;m the Structure Nazi it seems. We all have our areas of excellence but I prefer to pass the torch to my betters when I can&#8217;t do the topic justice beyond a basic introduction. Lots of love! And see you in church, LOL.</p>
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		By: Kristen Lamb		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2020/10/story-structure-crafting-stories-readers/#comment-114534</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kristen Lamb]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Oct 2020 21:48:01 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2020/10/story-structure-crafting-stories-readers/#comment-114533&quot;&gt;Chuck Eyler&lt;/a&gt;.

Yes. Your villain needs to fit the genre. Now I think you can get as evil as you want to, but if you pair a Hannibal Lecter with a cozy mystery the readers will hate it because genre sets reader expectations. But I read and have read some really gritty stuff. &quot;American Psycho,&quot; &quot;Pillars of the Earth,&quot; &quot;Queen of Bedlam,&quot; all the &quot;A Song of Ice &amp; Fire&quot; (&quot;Game of Thrones&quot;) books, and some mystery thrillers with villains that would give most people nightmares. I love a good villain, and love writing them. Just make sure you&#039;re fitting that villain in the right genre and you&#039;re golden ;) .]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2020/10/story-structure-crafting-stories-readers/#comment-114533">Chuck Eyler</a>.</p>
<p>Yes. Your villain needs to fit the genre. Now I think you can get as evil as you want to, but if you pair a Hannibal Lecter with a cozy mystery the readers will hate it because genre sets reader expectations. But I read and have read some really gritty stuff. &#8220;American Psycho,&#8221; &#8220;Pillars of the Earth,&#8221; &#8220;Queen of Bedlam,&#8221; all the &#8220;A Song of Ice &#038; Fire&#8221; (&#8220;Game of Thrones&#8221;) books, and some mystery thrillers with villains that would give most people nightmares. I love a good villain, and love writing them. Just make sure you&#8217;re fitting that villain in the right genre and you&#8217;re golden 😉 .</p>
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		By: Chuck Eyler		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Chuck Eyler]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Oct 2020 21:22:20 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Suggestion for posts. How evil can/should a villain be? If I am creeped out by my own villain have I gone too far? Are there genre levels of villain evilness?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Suggestion for posts. How evil can/should a villain be? If I am creeped out by my own villain have I gone too far? Are there genre levels of villain evilness?</p>
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