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		By: Kristen Lamb		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kristen Lamb]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Sep 2022 20:56:05 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2022/09/seven-deadly-sins-of-prologues/#comment-115985&quot;&gt;raynayday&lt;/a&gt;.

I don&#039;t know about that. I&#039;ve edited more books than I can count over the years and many from new authors who didn&#039;t understand the purpose of the prologue. I had to get them to either adjust it, move it or cut it. In the old days of all books being traditionally published, I could say that at least a skilled editor was overseeing if the device was used correctly or not. With modern publishing? Misuse is much more rampant. But, in that case, I probably (as a reader) would simply skip the entire book.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2022/09/seven-deadly-sins-of-prologues/#comment-115985">raynayday</a>.</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t know about that. I&#8217;ve edited more books than I can count over the years and many from new authors who didn&#8217;t understand the purpose of the prologue. I had to get them to either adjust it, move it or cut it. In the old days of all books being traditionally published, I could say that at least a skilled editor was overseeing if the device was used correctly or not. With modern publishing? Misuse is much more rampant. But, in that case, I probably (as a reader) would simply skip the entire book.</p>
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		By: raynayday		</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Sep 2022 22:56:17 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[A good article, Thanks Kristen. I advocate for the &quot;prologue&quot; I have read every single one in each book that contains one. I would suggest that those that skip prologues and epilogues are idiotic simpletons, but I do not wish to be harsh. I would suggest also that when they are eating the meat of the prawn, they may notice that it was contained within a shell. Also, every epilogue and post epilogue, Prelude and Elegy contains the seeds of the tale that entertains us. Why read the book if you wish to ignore the story?
There is a Scots colloquialism. &quot;Numptie&quot; it means someone with the learning ability and general outlook of a &quot;turnip&quot; I suspect that those that avoid Prologues and epilogues wuld be happy being Turnips.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A good article, Thanks Kristen. I advocate for the &#8220;prologue&#8221; I have read every single one in each book that contains one. I would suggest that those that skip prologues and epilogues are idiotic simpletons, but I do not wish to be harsh. I would suggest also that when they are eating the meat of the prawn, they may notice that it was contained within a shell. Also, every epilogue and post epilogue, Prelude and Elegy contains the seeds of the tale that entertains us. Why read the book if you wish to ignore the story?<br />
There is a Scots colloquialism. &#8220;Numptie&#8221; it means someone with the learning ability and general outlook of a &#8220;turnip&#8221; I suspect that those that avoid Prologues and epilogues wuld be happy being Turnips.</p>
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		By: V.M.Sang		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[V.M.Sang]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Sep 2022 10:54:18 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2022/09/seven-deadly-sins-of-prologues/#comment-115969&quot;&gt;Kristen Lamb&lt;/a&gt;.

When I started writing, I knew nothing. I&#039;d not done a creative writing degree, done no courses, didn&#039;t know about all the wonderful authors, like yourself, who spend time to help others hone their craft. I just sat before my computer and started writing. 
And yes, I wrote a prologue.
This prologue was one that happened several hundred years in the past and explained about the lost magical sword the companions had to find Inthe main story.
I thought this would be a single book. Find sword, find why the prophecy said it would be needed, discover who is the bad guy and kill him.
However, by the time they found the sword, it was already one book.
So, a trilogy, then. Second book had to have a prologue as the first did, I thought, so I wrote one. This book split the companions near the beginning, and followed one half of the group. So a third was needed for the other half. So, as the first two books had prologues, this one needed one, too.
I&#039;m currently on book 4, and in the rewriting phase. I&#039;m struggling with the idea of another prologue for book 5.
Do you think that if the first, or even the first couple of books have a prologue, all subsequent ones need one, too? Must the format be the same for all books in a series?
Oh, and I don&#039;t skip prologues myself. I think that if the author thought one was necessary, he/she must have some information to give that is important to understanding the story.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2022/09/seven-deadly-sins-of-prologues/#comment-115969">Kristen Lamb</a>.</p>
<p>When I started writing, I knew nothing. I&#8217;d not done a creative writing degree, done no courses, didn&#8217;t know about all the wonderful authors, like yourself, who spend time to help others hone their craft. I just sat before my computer and started writing.<br />
And yes, I wrote a prologue.<br />
This prologue was one that happened several hundred years in the past and explained about the lost magical sword the companions had to find Inthe main story.<br />
I thought this would be a single book. Find sword, find why the prophecy said it would be needed, discover who is the bad guy and kill him.<br />
However, by the time they found the sword, it was already one book.<br />
So, a trilogy, then. Second book had to have a prologue as the first did, I thought, so I wrote one. This book split the companions near the beginning, and followed one half of the group. So a third was needed for the other half. So, as the first two books had prologues, this one needed one, too.<br />
I&#8217;m currently on book 4, and in the rewriting phase. I&#8217;m struggling with the idea of another prologue for book 5.<br />
Do you think that if the first, or even the first couple of books have a prologue, all subsequent ones need one, too? Must the format be the same for all books in a series?<br />
Oh, and I don&#8217;t skip prologues myself. I think that if the author thought one was necessary, he/she must have some information to give that is important to understanding the story.</p>
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		By: Kristen Lamb		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kristen Lamb]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 19 Sep 2022 01:10:23 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2022/09/seven-deadly-sins-of-prologues/#comment-115966&quot;&gt;Neil Larkins&lt;/a&gt;.

Nathan is awesome. If it&#039;s short, I usually don&#039;t mind. Just so many are used improperly and it makes my head hurt. BUT that is why I take the time to write these posts! :D]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2022/09/seven-deadly-sins-of-prologues/#comment-115966">Neil Larkins</a>.</p>
<p>Nathan is awesome. If it&#8217;s short, I usually don&#8217;t mind. Just so many are used improperly and it makes my head hurt. BUT that is why I take the time to write these posts! 😀</p>
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		By: Kristen Lamb		</title>
		<link>https://authorkristenlamb.com/2022/09/seven-deadly-sins-of-prologues/#comment-115969</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kristen Lamb]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 19 Sep 2022 01:09:35 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://authorkristenlamb.com/2022/09/seven-deadly-sins-of-prologues/#comment-115965&quot;&gt;Anne Hagan&lt;/a&gt;.

Which is why it is critical to know WHY we use them. What is the purpose? Otherwise we could just be shooting our stories in the foot. Thanks for the comment!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://authorkristenlamb.com/2022/09/seven-deadly-sins-of-prologues/#comment-115965">Anne Hagan</a>.</p>
<p>Which is why it is critical to know WHY we use them. What is the purpose? Otherwise we could just be shooting our stories in the foot. Thanks for the comment!</p>
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		By: Alice Fleury		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Alice Fleury]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 19 Sep 2022 00:55:06 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I usually skip prologues especially a long one.  And I actually skipped all of Harry Potter. Until the last book. 

What bugs me is an epilogue. I hate them. All they do is sum up or explain what happened. Why doesn&#039;t anyone ever talk about them?  And if there&#039;s a prologue, shouldn&#039;t there be an epilogue so the story is neatly bookended?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I usually skip prologues especially a long one.  And I actually skipped all of Harry Potter. Until the last book. </p>
<p>What bugs me is an epilogue. I hate them. All they do is sum up or explain what happened. Why doesn&#8217;t anyone ever talk about them?  And if there&#8217;s a prologue, shouldn&#8217;t there be an epilogue so the story is neatly bookended?</p>
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		By: Neil Larkins		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Neil Larkins]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Sep 2022 02:06:47 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Great post, Kristen! I landed here by way of Nathan Bransford. He felt you could say his thoughts on prologue better than him.
I agree with you about this. I am one one of those who slides past long prologues. Get to the story! I hear myself saying. As a writer I sometimes use prologue, sometimes not. When I do, I keep it short, only a sentence or two. It&#039;s more like an introduction. In my current just self-published memoir, I tell the reader why I wrote it and why it took so long... fifty years. That second probably wasn&#039;t necessary since most memoirs are many years away from when they happened, but it&#039;s out there now. 
Thanks once again.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great post, Kristen! I landed here by way of Nathan Bransford. He felt you could say his thoughts on prologue better than him.<br />
I agree with you about this. I am one one of those who slides past long prologues. Get to the story! I hear myself saying. As a writer I sometimes use prologue, sometimes not. When I do, I keep it short, only a sentence or two. It&#8217;s more like an introduction. In my current just self-published memoir, I tell the reader why I wrote it and why it took so long&#8230; fifty years. That second probably wasn&#8217;t necessary since most memoirs are many years away from when they happened, but it&#8217;s out there now.<br />
Thanks once again.</p>
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		By: Anne Hagan		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Anne Hagan]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 16 Sep 2022 19:30:54 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Prologues are not used often in genres I write in, but when I was researching a different genre to write (legal thriller), I found they were used about 30% of the time. I read one in a legal thriller by a well known author that gave the entire story away. I knew &#039;whodunnit&#039; and why from the prologue. As I delved into the story and backstory details were given out, my suspicions were entirely confirmed by the time I was 2/3rds of the way through the book. What a waste!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Prologues are not used often in genres I write in, but when I was researching a different genre to write (legal thriller), I found they were used about 30% of the time. I read one in a legal thriller by a well known author that gave the entire story away. I knew &#8216;whodunnit&#8217; and why from the prologue. As I delved into the story and backstory details were given out, my suspicions were entirely confirmed by the time I was 2/3rds of the way through the book. What a waste!</p>
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		By: Jan Sikes		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jan Sikes]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 16 Sep 2022 15:56:20 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[As always, this is a fabulous post, Kristen! Thank you for sharing your expertise!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As always, this is a fabulous post, Kristen! Thank you for sharing your expertise!</p>
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		By: Ken Hughes		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Ken Hughes]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 15 Sep 2022 13:32:17 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Masterful analysis (and some of your best meme punctuations, and that&#039;s saying something).

A prologue should be there for *contrast.* It&#039;s when the best place to begin the main line of the story provides a solid Chapter One, but all that works even better with a glimpse of something else first, and the contrast between the two is so useful that it&#039;s worth making it that all-important first thing readers see. It&#039;s when we simply can&#039;t understand the big celebrity hero unless we first glimpse him waking up hung over -- when a slow-build horror story needs a glimpse of the monster eating someone to promise where it&#039;s going -- when an epic tale really needs to open with a chronicler or record to give it that sense of history.

Choosing the true Chapter One is one of the most important skills a writer can have, because it&#039;s always the one we get to show off first. A prologue means a chance to do it twice in different ways, and show off the synergy between them too, and it&#039;s glorious... When. It. Works.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Masterful analysis (and some of your best meme punctuations, and that&#8217;s saying something).</p>
<p>A prologue should be there for *contrast.* It&#8217;s when the best place to begin the main line of the story provides a solid Chapter One, but all that works even better with a glimpse of something else first, and the contrast between the two is so useful that it&#8217;s worth making it that all-important first thing readers see. It&#8217;s when we simply can&#8217;t understand the big celebrity hero unless we first glimpse him waking up hung over &#8212; when a slow-build horror story needs a glimpse of the monster eating someone to promise where it&#8217;s going &#8212; when an epic tale really needs to open with a chronicler or record to give it that sense of history.</p>
<p>Choosing the true Chapter One is one of the most important skills a writer can have, because it&#8217;s always the one we get to show off first. A prologue means a chance to do it twice in different ways, and show off the synergy between them too, and it&#8217;s glorious&#8230; When. It. Works.</p>
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