Firearms are a staple in many different genres of fiction. Choosing a genre is critical because it makes it far easier to define your audience, connect with them and ultimately, sell more books. Here is a post that explains all the different genres, as well as the nuanced differences.
Firearms are obviously most commonly used in thrillers, but they can be used in mystery, suspense and all the varied kissing cousin genres. For those who want to learn more, I have a class next week The Edge: How to Write Mystery, Suspense & Thriller where I will also cover more on this topic (register HERE).
Today, however, we’ll defer to the serious experts. Piper is here on behalf of the fabulous Bayard & Holmes to download some critical information.
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Know Your Firearm
Whether you love firearms, hate them, or can take them or leave them, they are a staple of crime and thriller fiction. Unfortunately, fiction is often laden with firearms fictions. Bayard & Holmes are dedicated to helping authors avoid those firearms fictions, so we’ll take a look at the firearms that turn up most often in espionage and crime fiction—the revolver, the semi-automatic, and the automatic.
Before we get to the differences in those types of handguns, though, we need to address the most common firearm misnomer of all time — the “clip” vs. the “magazine.” Time and again in fiction, shooters are reloading their “clips” into their “automatic” pistols, when they should be loading their “magazines” into their “semiautomatics.” Let’s take a look at the distinctions so that you savvy folks will never make those mistakes.
Clip Vs. Magazine
A magazine has a spring that force-feeds the ammunition as the shooter fires. A clip does not have a spring or a feed mechanism. It simply holds the ammo and attaches to a magazine or inserts directly into a firearm. These are examples of “clips.”
On the left half of the picture, we have an empty M1 Garand clip, an M1 Garand clip loaded with eight rounds of 30-06 ammunition, and the brass from a 30-06 spent cartridge. On the right half of the picture, we have nine rounds of 7.62×39 ammunition loaded onto a “stripper clip” and an empty stripper clip. This stripper clip holds ten rounds. The tenth 7.26×39 cartridge is just above the loaded clip.
The clips are plain metal with no springs or gadgets of any kind that assist in feeding the ammunition through the firearm. Once the cartridges have been fired, the clips can be reloaded. However, in combat that is highly unlikely. A clip would normally be discarded and a new clip loaded into the magazine or the magazine well, depending on the firearm.
The vast majority of firearms made after WWII do not use clips.
Extremely few modern weapons that use clips are being manufactured today unless they are replicas of old weapons, with the rare exception of a few Smith & Wesson revolvers that use moon clips. So unless your character is using a historical weapon or one of the rare modern firearms that take actual “clips,” the terminology is a fiction.
Next we have “magazines.” Magazines are widely used in both handguns and rifles. They can be detachable or not. They hold cartridges and can be quickly and easily reloaded. There are springs in the magazines that assist in feeding the ammunition through the firearms.
The larger magazine in the picture is an “extended grip” 9mm SIG Sauer magazine, and the smaller magazine is from a Smith & Wesson Bodyguard .380. These magazines fit into the handles of the pistols shown. Magazines are made of metal or plastic and can be reused countless times. They don’t get “used up” just because all of the rounds are fired.
If you’re writing historical fiction, you might, indeed, have a weapon that uses a clip. If you are writing anything post-WWII, your weapon, unless it is a revolver, will likely have a magazine. We recommend you do a bit of research on the specific model of weapon in your manuscript, including the year it was made.
A revolver is so called because the cartridges reside in a revolving cylinder.
Almost no revolver ever made has an actual manual safety mechanism. Like the semiautomatic, one trigger pull equals one shot. However, the brass shells are not ejected automatically. A shooter must open the cylinder and eject all of the shells simultaneously and reload. A shooter can hasten this process by using a “speed loader” to insert all of the cartridges with one motion. The legalities of revolver ownership vary from state to state, but revolvers are generally the most legally accepted of handguns.
Things to remember about revolvers:
- Ammunition is loaded into a cylinder.
- Revolvers virtually never have manual safety mechanisms.
- One trigger pull results in one shot.
- No brass is ejected.
- Legal in varying degrees according to state law.
With a semiautomatic, ammunition loads into a removable magazine that usually fits into the pistol grip, like the ones pictured above.
To reload, a shooter drops the empty magazine out of the grip and snaps in a full magazine. Most people are able to drop a magazine and snap a new one into a semiautomatic faster than they can reload a revolver; however, a skilled shooter is just as quick with a speed loader. Like the revolver, one trigger pull always equals one shot. Unlike the revolver, the brass is ejected with each shot. Also unlike the revolver, a semiautomatic often has a manual safety device.
Semiautomatics are legal in all states, but only to varying degrees in different places. In a few states, they practically come as prizes in the bottom of Cracker Jack boxes, while in others, they are more difficult to obtain than a straight answer from a politician.
It is extremely common for a semiautomatic to be inaccurately referred to throughout media, movies, and TV as an “automatic” weapon. No matter how hot the journalist, movie star, or soap opera star might be, it simply isn’t so. If you make that mistake in your own writing, you are sure to get a bursting inbox full of corrections.
Things to remember about semiautomatics:
- Ammunition is loaded in a magazine.
- One trigger pull equals one shot.
- Often has manual safety mechanism.
- Brass is ejected, usually to the right of the weapon, every time a shot goes off.
- Legality varies according to state. Some states make semiautomatics difficult to obtain, or they restrict the size of the magazine. Other states have the Cracker Jack Box standard.
With an automatic weapon, the cartridges load into a removable magazine. The weapon is called automatic because when a shooter pulls the trigger, it automatically fires repeated bullets until the shooter takes their finger off the trigger. When the shooter fires, the brass shells of the cartridges are ejected from the weapon at high speed.
Modern automatic weapons are generally illegal for private ownership without special government procedures—emphasis on “generally.” There are three ways an individual in America can obtain an automatic weapon. . . .
The Firearm Owners Protection Act of 1986 made it illegal for private individuals to acquire fully automatic weapons without special permission from the Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco, and Firearms. Private gun owners can still obtain one of the pre-1986 fully automatic firearms if they fill out a form, wait several months, secure a tax stamp, and purchase the firearm for an exorbitant amount of money—exorbitant because, according to the National Rifle Association, there are only around 150,000 pre-1986 fully automatic weapons in private ownership.
The second way private individuals can obtain an automatic weapon is by going through the intense process of obtaining a license to manufacture Class III/NFA firearms. Once the individual has this license, they can secure a conversion kit to modify a semiautomatic rifle to make it fully automatic. With the hassle and expense, though, we recommend using the money for a nice beach vacation rather than pursuing one of these weapons.
The third way to obtain an automatic weapon in America is the timeless and ever-popular method known as theft. If your characters try this method, especially with anyone who owns an automatic weapon, that owner might remember to use it on your character.
Things to remember about automatics:
- Ammunition is loaded in a magazine.
- One trigger pull equals multiple shots.
- Likely has a safety mechanism.
- Brass is ejected as the shooter is firing.
- Illegal for private owners everywhere in the United States except with a very detailed, expensive process.
It’s worth noting that different types of ammunition and barrels impact accuracy and are used for different purposes.
For example, Bayard & Holmes use hollow point cartridges for self-defense because the bullets are less likely to pass through the target and harm someone behind them. Different barrels with different types of rifling are also used depending on the purpose at hand.
Firearms experts have written treatises about the many subtleties of ammunition and barrels. If you discuss types of ammunition and barrels in your fiction, we recommend you read one of these treatises before you commit your writing to stone or Kindle. If you make a mistake, firearms experts will call you on it, and they can be pretty rough about it.
Be aware that no matter how much you research, there are firearms aficionados who will write to you about the rarest and most obscure exception to whatever you say and tell you that you’re stupid. Don’t let that bother you. It’s what they live for. Be reasonably diligent in your vocabulary, hit the big things like “revolver,” “semiautomatic,” “automatic,” “clip,” and “magazine,” and you can be pretty sure the vast majority of your readers will be satisfied. As for the rest, don’t feed the trolls.
Thank You, Piper!
I love these action-packed genres and I’ve lost count how many times I’ve encountered otherwise great books that botched their gun research. One time, I tossed a book across the room when the character put the safety on her revolver *silent screams*.
If we are going to put anything in our books, firearms included, then we need to do at least the basic research…which is why I have posts like this to help!
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Great post! I got commentary once when I used the “California standard” magazine in a story. We have a 10-round limit on our magazines and, of course one of my Midwestern beta readers politely called me on it. The fix was to find a way to mention it in the story, so the gun geeks could relax. It was the perfect beta reader catch!
Overall this is a good, accurate post but I do have a couple of exceptions. By the way, I’m a Navy veteran and avid shooter.
Most revolvers do not have a safety as you have said but Heritage Manufacturing makes single-action revolvers with a safety to the left of the hammer.
While it is true that most automatic and semi-automatic firearms us magazines, many automatic firearms like machineguns have belt fed mechanisms.
Do not, in a modern story using modern firearms, ever have your character smell cordite. First, most people wouldn’t know cordite if they saw it. Second, it hasn’t been used as small arms ammunition in decades. It was mainly a UK propellant for artillery and anti-tank guns, although it was also used in a few rifles up until about 1915. It’s no longer produced, either.
LMAO that is SOOOO a peeve of mine! Bwa ha ha ha ha ha ha!
Great post for writers with gun scenes in their stories. As a veteran and twenty-four year resident of Texas, take a wild guess as to whether or not I’m a gun owner. My pet peeve in both novels and movies is the inaccurate portrayal of firearms. I recently read the first book in a popular fantasy series, although the author correctly referred to handguns as either revolvers or semi automatic pistols, he insisted on calling the magazine a clip. Characters in movies often blast away with unlimited rounds from magazines that at most hold half the number. This information is easy to research. As a side note, I’ve never shot a .44 magnum, but in a Lewisville gun range stood in the booth next to someone practicing with one. It was loud and from five feet away I could feel a shock wave. I don’t know if that’s an indoor thing, but it took me by surprise.
Same thing happened to me standing near someone shooting a Desert Eagle, LOL.
That drives me BONKERS. A clip goes in your HAIR a magazine in your GUN. And movies have gotten better (LOVE Wick) but I was one of those picky people who counted rounds as I rolled my eyes and wished for a magic pistol with an unlimited magazine.
The .50 caliber Desert Eagle? I roll my eyes when the main character fires the last of forty rounds from their 9mm, drops the magazine, inserts a new one then racks the slide when it should be locked open.
RIGHT? Or the gun is empty but the slide is still closed. But then they reload it before racking the slide to make sure all the ammo cycled through.
There is a bit of an error in the section on automatic weapons. While some machine guns use magazines, larger machine guns, like the one illustrated, use belts to feed large amounts of cartridges. The belt is a more efficient feeding system in this case, as it can carry 250 or more rounds, vice 20 to 30 for most magazines. The belts are actually interlocking links that the cartridges fit into and the fall apart after the spent casings are ejected from the gun.
I must have a strange experience because I am surrounded by gun people who know very well the difference between a clip and a magazine, but pretty much every one of them will call a magazine a clip when talking. So it has never seemed like a big deal to me but I see so many people online criticizing the usage.
One of my biggest peeves in all of fiction, not just re firearms, occurs when the villain has the drop on the MC. We’re still 30 pages from the end, so the writer can’t just have Basil Babalugats shoot Bondjames Bond, as he would IRL. No, the writer does something like this:
Babalugats took a step forward, stumbled, and dropped his Luger.
Schrecklich! People who stumble don’t drop things; they grasp them tighter. They did “the old stumble trick” in “Pay it Forward,” much to my disgust.
IIRR, this is mentioned in L. Sprague de Camp’s Science Fiction Handbook, circa 1955.
A workshop friend started to argue with me about this, until she remembered hauling herself on-shore, totally drenched, after a canoe mishap. Her companion, similarly damp, had said, “What are you going to do with that?” pointing at the oar still clutched in her hand.